麻烦帮我看看，这英文（语法错误没）写得对吗？

Hello everyone, my name is Wang Xinyi, I am Wuhan Chongren road primary school student, I am eight years old this year, I most love the beautiful things to draw down, also like English, it accompanies me to the primary school from kindergarten, is my best friend, today I performed for all is a English song, name"I can sing a Rainbow"

Hello everyone, my name is Wang Xinyi, I am (a) Wuhan Chongren road primary school student, I am eight years old this year, (I most love the beautiful things to draw down 这句太混乱，要改为: I like to draw beautiful things very much), (要加 and I) also like English, it accompanies me to the primary school from kindergarten, (要加 it) is my best friend, today I (performed时态错了，应该是: I like to perform) for all is (a 要用 an) English song, name(是: named 或 called) "I can sing a Rainbow"

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