研究生复试英语自我介绍,请帮忙修改一下

我是体育生 文化基础相对较差 自己写了一篇自我介绍
请强人帮我修改下 也许有的地方不够简洁 希望帮忙改下
能简化的地方也帮忙修改下 便于我到时的面试发挥 毕竟越简单的
对我来说 自我介绍时出错的几率越小

Good morning. I am very glad to be here for this interview.

First let me introduce myself. My name is XXX, I come from Hubei province Yichang city ,which is the most beautiful city in my heart, I deeply of feel proud for him,the city have Beautiful scene, and also have impressive-looking of three gorges dam

I've finished my undergraduate education in wuhan institute of physical education ,

I am open-minded . willing and quick in thought and also have a Spirit of enterprise and Presume to face a challenge .i have broad interests like reading watching films .singing.and Traveling

From the high school, i start accept athletics training, the first of my study item is high jump,and I take part in the game of whole citieses and finaly get a good result, go to during the days in the senior high school started accept regular basketball training, once attended the basketball match of high school student of proper Yichang and Hubei province, had basic basketball sport foundation, during the days in the university study in movement human science profession, i stopped halfway basketball train and started accept Sport train theories of knowledge, certain degree of understanding of sport train and Sport hurt

The reason I choose this professional is , I once accepted basketball train and had to basketball certain degree of understanding, this can Combine the knowledge of the study in university

If I can be admin , I plan to concentrate on the study and research in this field in my graduate time .

Thank you

另外 我像了解下一些相关专业英语的翻译:

有: 挡拆 运球 联防 掩护 之类的。。 一些篮球技术基础用此

能修改好的 最大追加分数

真心谢谢帮我修改的人 后天就面试了。。

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview.

My name is XXX, I come from Hubei Yichang, which is the most beautiful city in my heart, I deeply feel proud of her, the city is of beautiful scenery, and has impressive-looking of three gorges dam

I graduate from physical education department of Wuhan institute.

I am open-minded, has good communication skills and aggressive attitude, and am ready to face new challenges. i have broad interests like reading, watching films .singing.and Traveling

From high school, i started taking athletics training, the first sport I learn is high jump. and I had taken part in the game of the city and had got a good result, Later I started taking regular basketball training, and had attended the basketball match for high school student of Yichang and Hubei province, during learning XX专业 in university, i stopped basketball training and started learning sport training theories, from which I got certain knowledge of sport training and Sport hurt

The reason I choose this specialty is , I had taken basketball training and have certain knowledge, and most of all, I’m really interested in it. I believe all these would be much helpful for my further study in university.

If I get this precious chance, I will cherish all my school time to be diligent and devoted on studying in this field.

Thank you

改得好辛苦啊,本来是要注明改动了哪些地方,但是百度好像不支持显示下划线等格式,就只能把改好的直接给你了,不一定最好,但在你写的基础上,我认为这么改比较合适,你之前学的专业是什么不清楚,只有你自己用心问问怎么说标准了,专业名词可去专业网站查,或通过百度搜。
如果觉得英语不好,那么就把准备好的背下来也没什么,顺便再深入准备些自我介绍里提到的相关内容,以免考官围绕自我介绍内容进行提问。
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第1个回答  2009-04-23
背下来不是好方法。老师能看出来你是背的。如果那样他们常再问些问题,那就露馅了。还不如让人看看你的真本事。
第2个回答  2009-04-23
大致看了下还行,能看出你是花了一定功夫来写的!~
其实复试的时候自信点就好啦~就算是纯外国人也不可能没有一点语法错误是吧~
第3个回答  2009-04-23
花什么功夫,完全是网上摘得
那些篮球词汇,玩玩NBAlive或者看看NBA英语赛事就知道了
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