考研复试，英语自我介绍请求修改

马上去考研复试需要英文面试作为考察，上午做到现在总算好了，由于许多是中译汉，不地道，所以请专业的帮我修改下，当然越详细越好了，比如不地道或者可以表达更好。如果觉得内容不恰当也希望能帮我指证出来，
用word修改的可以截图，总共还剩10积分了，如果有详细的批改可以再加10分。 请英语专业人士作答。谢谢。
Good morning,professors.First of all,please allow me to express my appreciation for the opportunity that you give me .And I hope I can make a good performance today.

My name is DingChao.the first name ding is same as the the protagonist's chinese name in cartoon of the Adventure of tintin,and the second name chao is same as the chinese name of the film superman.They lend a glory to my name and both of them are my role models giving me energy.I am twenty-five years old.I come from Dongtai,jiangsu Province where the love legend Goddess Marriage originated in.I graduated from the electronic engineering department of jiangsu university of science and technology in july 2012.

Generally speaking,I am a hard working and analytical student.This is my second war against postgraduate exams.After I failed last year,I knew that I must take it again and I must find the reason of the failure.During the study in the past half year,I often check up my study and analyzed the problem of learning method.And at the same time,I will consult my freids for davise.
Well,in my spare time,I am intrested in time management.I think it's really important for me and anyone else.I often focus on the massive online open course and take part in some of them which I am interested in.At the same time,I keep learning English evryday because zhongdaolong is my role model who let me know that there is no shortcut in learning.In addition,I like reading and running.All the things need scientifc time management,if can pass the test I will practice it in my future study life.

Talking about the reason for taking postgraduate exams.First of all,I love my major of eletronic engeneering which can make any devices as you like.Altough I can study in working,graduate study will give me the systematic knowledge frame in this field.
Secondly,I am deeply attracted by the scholar atmosphere in institute.I love this feeling and it suits with my character.
The last but not least,my own research experince and my mentors' serious research attitude will be my most precious possessions in the future.

Life is precious. So it is necessary to seize any chance for self-development.
In the end,I want thank my friends and my parents who have offered me encouragement and support.
That's all.Thank you very much.
这是自己写的，需要帮助改下英文，不需要翻译了。

谢谢，怎么都帮我翻译出来了，自己写的英文，主要是检查英文。

你自己写的啊。还可以啊。不错。我自觉得没有什么可以修改的了。这样挺好的