题目:Living on or off Campus
要求:1.住校的好处
2.住在家里的好处。
3.我的观点。
Living on or off Campus
Nowadays,more and more students live live in home because it has a lot of advantages.First , living in home is more comfortable than living on compus.Second, They can live with their parent and eat more delicious food.Finally,If they have problem in study , they can search it with computer conveniently.
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of living on campus. At the same time,they say living on campus is a good chance which communicate with each other to cultiveate our teamwork. Besides,they have more time to study. Last but not the least,it is a good time to cultivate our self-support.
As far as i am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. I think living on school not only give us a chance to make friends but also learn more things which never learn from home. Therefore I would like to living on campus.
老师,请给我讲的详细点,我的语法很次,全是凭感觉写的,相信一定有很多语法错误。还有自己的词汇量太差,总会用到重复的句型和词,老师帮我修改一下,谢谢。
有没有老师可以帮帮我啊?? 把我的文章复制下来,然后告诉我那个地方错了。 语法上没有错误码?