请帮忙看一下下面这段话是否通顺、正确，有没有语法错误，谢谢！
Today ,it’s new year that Chinese traditional festival,I just represent myself say happy new year to everyone! In a past year , we've got a lot of harvest,all of this couldn't depart with your work hard,so I proposal that let's us hold the goblet, to wish the next year willbe better! Cheers!
Today ,it’s Chinese New years day.(这里这麼说就行了,外国人懂什麽是Chinese new year). I would like to represent myself to say happy new year to everyone! In the past year , we got a good harvest,all of this couldn't be done without your effort([ˈɛfət],你想表达努力吧`一般用这个词更合适`你原来的有语法错误 ).So let's(let's本来就有建议的意思,不用我建议在前面,let's是let us的缩写,所以us去掉) hold the goblet, to cheer for the past year and wish a better new year!!!cheers!!!
大概这麼多吧`这样语法基本没什麼问题了
大概这麼多吧`这样语法基本没什麼问题了
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第1个回答 2010-01-21
Today，it's the first day in the lunar calendar which is called spring festival,I just want to say happy new year to everyone on behalf of myself!In the last year,we achieved a lot.And these all depended on your hard work.So let's drink,and wish a better year!Cheers!
第2个回答 2010-01-21
It is Chinese traditional Spring Festival today . I just represent myselfe to say happy new year to everyone ! In the past year , we've got a lot of achievement, which attributed to your hard work.So , let's all take glasses , blessing for a better tomorrow .Cheers!
你应该是把这段话用在酒桌上的。这样说比较口语化~
你应该是把这段话用在酒桌上的。这样说比较口语化~
第3个回答 2010-01-21
应该没有啊
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