懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误

Stranger: whats your name?
You: I do not speak English, each response may be a long time, please wait

Stranger: okay
You: I help you, and I have the names of relations?
Stranger: i need help, i want to get my friend back
You: I also want to help you, but how can I help you do
Stranger: where do you come from?
You: I am a Chinese
Stranger: i love asians
You: I am in china
You: What do you want me to do
Stranger: can you tell me how i can get my friend back?

Stranger: you are lucky, you live in a beautiful place then
You: Well, Shaanxi Province in central China, is indeed a beautiful city
Stranger: i wish i could visit china one day
You: You are most welcome to come to China, there are many beautiful places, some make you linger from
Stranger: yes i bet china is an amazing country. have you ever been to europe?
You: I am sorry I did not go
Stranger: maybe you can visit one day, you would like it
You: I so believe, I hope so after I graduated from college, to have the opportunity to travel to Europe, I believe it will definitely be very hot unforgettable spiritual journey

主要看“Stranger”的

楼上滴,
就是 can you tell me how i can get my friend back?这句是对的。
can you tell me后面句子是陈述语序~
第二个也是对的, would like do sth,..
there are many beautiful places, some make you linger from

我觉得应该是 There are many beautiful places,some of which make you ...那是两个句子,说着加句号分成两句。不过我觉得我那样改的更标准~

I also want to help you, but how can I help you do
应该是but how can I help you,
each response may be a long time
我觉得 may take a long time 要好点吧~
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第1个回答  2010-08-03
Stranger: can you tell me how i can get my friend back?
应改为can you tell me how can i get my friend back
Stranger: maybe you can visit one day, you would like
应把would改为will
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