题目: Tell me about your city
Well as you can probably guess I come from Harbin and I lived here all my life. In fact, I never leave my hometown except travel. I suppose if I had to describe Harbin, the first thing I would say is that the weather of winter is absolutely cold and the summer always cool but too short. Maybe even it has the lowest average temperature among all of the Chinese provincial capitals I guess. It’s so cold that the Songhua River which goes through our city will freeze about five months. But another point I could add is that thanks to the winter, it makes my hometown famous for ice and snow. The government builds ice engraving and snow sculpture to establish a large-scale amusement park in order to attract tourists. And I shouldn’t forget to mention that one of my hometown’s significant characteristic is that Russian and Japanese architectures and cobblestone streets. Actually, it is hardly to see at other cities.
谢谢,前面两个指出的错误看懂了,最后一个“最后一句也不多。。。”是什么?是整句话有问题吗?
追答啊 是最后一句也不对 打错了。。 如果按原句改的话,应是 They are hardly to be seen in other cities. 读起来有些地方很bie, 不要刻意去套用句型, 叙述通顺自然就好。