有没有英语高手可以帮忙检查一下句子有无错误，并帮忙翻译下，谢谢！

这本书是分级读本This book is graded readers。它告诉我们许多知识。It tells us many knowledge如:Piccsso的故事,mime起源、古埃及艺术家如何绘制一幅肖像画Such as:the story of Piccsso,the origination of mime and how the ancient Egypt artists draw a portrait在书中,你可以找到答案。In the book,you can find the answers.这本书的句子不难，There aren't difficult sentences in this book.书中有很多照片。And there are many pictures in it.它非常有趣,值得一看。It's very interesting and worth to read.

this book is graded readers 没看懂
第二句错误 it tells us many knowledge, such as the story of Piccsso, mime origin, and ancient Egypt artists. 建议把后面那啥how to 去掉
后面一句差不多
在后面一句不对 the book doesn't cover difficult sentences. there are many pictures. the book is very interesting and worth a look.
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内个哈。ancient Egypt artists how to draw a portrait?本来想问古埃及艺术家如何绘制肖像，请问该怎么改?

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因为前面两个都是单独的单词或者词组，并列的第三个用了从句会显得比较奇怪。
建议去掉，不去掉也没什么关系。
有两种改法
1.as the story of Piccsso, mime origin, and ancient Egypt artists‘ portraits.
2.as the story of Piccsso, mime origin, and how ancient Egypt artists drew portraits.

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这本书是分级的读者。它告诉我们许多知识。如:Piccsso的故事,mime起源、古埃及艺术家如何绘制一幅肖像画吗?在书中,你可以解决这些问题。在书中,没有困难的句子。这些都是很多照片。它非常有趣,值得一看。追问

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似乎是是中式英语，看的眼晕

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TAT楼主坑爹的英语水平你伤不起。