检讨尊敬的老师； 你好，我叫··，是··年级··班的。 ·月·号我因为吸烟，被老师抓到，现在已经知道错了，真的，我已经知道错了。 现在想起来，我十分后悔自己当初犯下的错误，我一时鬼迷心窍居然吸烟了，我知道错了。 我违反了学校的纪律，违反了班归班纪，违反了《中学生日常守则》，违反了班主任制定的一系列规矩，我辜负了老师对我的谆谆教导，辜负了学校对我的培养，辜负了家人对我殷切期望，辜负了老师在我身上花费的精力，辜负了老师在我的身上花费的时间，辜负了学校给了我这么好的条件，辜负了学校对我的一系列关怀和帮助。 我真的知道我错了，当老师教导我时，我心中还有些不乐意，现在，我已经冷静下来了，知道自己的行为的错误性，知道了自己行为的荒谬性，知道了自己行为给班级摸黑了，给学校的工作制造了麻烦，我已经知道错了。 请老师再给我一次机会，如有再犯，请老师严肃处理。 犯错人； ·· ··年··月··日 先描述事件 越详细越好然后写坏的影响 小的方面 大的方面 吸烟有害健康 不仅是自己的 还有周围人的 等等然后写认识 通过教育 认识到问题的严重 之类的 会引发火灾 啊 什么的然后总结 升华 上升的大道理 怎么恶心怎么往上上吧 要戒烟什么的 痛改前非最后建议楼主下次抽烟小心点啊 找个隐蔽的地方别被抓了
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第1个回答 2008-01-03
只能给你参考！不过是英文 那还好！你女朋友不一定有兴趣看！加油！以后少抽烟！Great days to be remembered seldom come, but small ones surround us daily.
I do not have a Roman holiday, but I have a non smoking day instead.
Today a nc-smoking sign easily hooks up my interesting and rewarding experience on the world non smoking day a few years
As a high school student, I, together with my friends, volunteered on a campaign to discourage public smoking by persuacling people in public places to extinguish their cigarettes and put the cigarette ends into our metal boxes. And we would in return give them a memorial sticker bearing patterns and words voicing the theme of the non smoking day.
The first step is never a fast step. After hunting for quite a while, we set our target on a young man who was enjoying his cigarette at a bus stop. Embracing the philosophy of "nothing ventured, nothing gained", we summoned up all our courage,walked up and asked, "Sir, would you please not smoke in public places?" "It is none of your business! Why are you so busily engaged in such things? Go and mind your own exams!" He was great, I believed, for he was able to drag on his cigarette while at the same time not giving his tongue a break. And I further found out that for this man, such words as "good for your health" or "good for common courtesy" had long lost their appeal. Maybe such kind of situation should call for some other policy. I managed a smile, blended with sweet words and tried to dilute his resistance. And when we put the sticker on his clothes, he was lingering over the joy of having done us "a big favor."
Now you see, maybe flattery should be vindicated, for to please is a great step toward persuading and a smile is a curve that sets everything straight.
Our work ran smoothly when things began easy to handle in the afternoon. But don’t worry. Troubles are just around the corner. The second hard rock we met was a middle aged man who appeared to be more of a smoking addict than a smokingenthusiast. Nothing seemed to be capable of extinguishing that cigarette. Even the wind seemed to be powerless. We showed him the cigarettes filled metal box. We spotlighted the hazards of public smoking. But all was in vain.
Mark Twain was right, habit is habit, not to be flung out of window by anyone, but to be coaxed downstairs one step at a time. I then tried to peel the stubborn onion one layer at a time."Ok, I know how you feel. But do you know how other people around you feel?" "You see that child? Actually he smokes more of your cigarette than you do!" "In fact, you are extinguishing one cell of lung cancer when you extinguish your cigarette. You are extinguishing one cell of the disease of selfishness when you extinguish your cigarette." It is that maybe that constant drops do wear the stone. At last he extinguished our words by extinguishing his cigarette.
As the sinking sun tinted the horizon, we began to count the cigarette ends, savoring our little victories.
That day saw me toiling for 6 hours, inviting loads of troubles, collecting 57 cigarette-ends,savoring hundreds of potential second hand smokers and developing for myself some sense of responsibility toward society.
Though it was a little depressing to realize that those people would naturally pick up their "tradition" just where they had temporarily laid it down, yet how far can we estimate our actions would travel! And besides that, I was rewarded in another day.That is, the experience dawned upon me the significance of care and consideration for other people. Since then, I have been as cooperative as possible whenever I am asked to improve my public behavior and I am always ready to get involved in such volunteer work.
In a sense, the highest reward for ones toil is not what they get from it but what they become by it.
简 评
吸烟有害，这个道理妇孺皆知，况且吸烟不仅对自己有害，还危及他人的健康。于是有了“戒烟日”。然而，劝人戒烟是辛苦的工作，例如作者所付出的努力。
作者有着很强的语言驾驭力，文字优美准确，意思表达到位，例如：“Embracing the philosophy of‘nothing ventured，nothing gained，，we summoned up a11 our courage，．．．”；“And l further found out that for this man，such words as‘good for your
health，．．．had long lost their appeal．”；“As the sinking sun timted the horizon，．．．”等等。
但在第二个例子的描述上，有些地方叙述有待商榷，例如：“In fact，you are extinguishing one cell Of lung cancer when you extinguish your cigarette．Youare extinguishing one cell“the disease Of selfishness when yOU extinguish your cigarette．”叙述重复，意思不很明朗。对此，作者似乎还可做进一步的修改。
总体说来，作者出彩的文字运用使本文的可读性很强。
I do not have a Roman holiday, but I have a non smoking day instead.
Today a nc-smoking sign easily hooks up my interesting and rewarding experience on the world non smoking day a few years
As a high school student, I, together with my friends, volunteered on a campaign to discourage public smoking by persuacling people in public places to extinguish their cigarettes and put the cigarette ends into our metal boxes. And we would in return give them a memorial sticker bearing patterns and words voicing the theme of the non smoking day.
The first step is never a fast step. After hunting for quite a while, we set our target on a young man who was enjoying his cigarette at a bus stop. Embracing the philosophy of "nothing ventured, nothing gained", we summoned up all our courage,walked up and asked, "Sir, would you please not smoke in public places?" "It is none of your business! Why are you so busily engaged in such things? Go and mind your own exams!" He was great, I believed, for he was able to drag on his cigarette while at the same time not giving his tongue a break. And I further found out that for this man, such words as "good for your health" or "good for common courtesy" had long lost their appeal. Maybe such kind of situation should call for some other policy. I managed a smile, blended with sweet words and tried to dilute his resistance. And when we put the sticker on his clothes, he was lingering over the joy of having done us "a big favor."
Now you see, maybe flattery should be vindicated, for to please is a great step toward persuading and a smile is a curve that sets everything straight.
Our work ran smoothly when things began easy to handle in the afternoon. But don’t worry. Troubles are just around the corner. The second hard rock we met was a middle aged man who appeared to be more of a smoking addict than a smokingenthusiast. Nothing seemed to be capable of extinguishing that cigarette. Even the wind seemed to be powerless. We showed him the cigarettes filled metal box. We spotlighted the hazards of public smoking. But all was in vain.
Mark Twain was right, habit is habit, not to be flung out of window by anyone, but to be coaxed downstairs one step at a time. I then tried to peel the stubborn onion one layer at a time."Ok, I know how you feel. But do you know how other people around you feel?" "You see that child? Actually he smokes more of your cigarette than you do!" "In fact, you are extinguishing one cell of lung cancer when you extinguish your cigarette. You are extinguishing one cell of the disease of selfishness when you extinguish your cigarette." It is that maybe that constant drops do wear the stone. At last he extinguished our words by extinguishing his cigarette.
As the sinking sun tinted the horizon, we began to count the cigarette ends, savoring our little victories.
That day saw me toiling for 6 hours, inviting loads of troubles, collecting 57 cigarette-ends,savoring hundreds of potential second hand smokers and developing for myself some sense of responsibility toward society.
Though it was a little depressing to realize that those people would naturally pick up their "tradition" just where they had temporarily laid it down, yet how far can we estimate our actions would travel! And besides that, I was rewarded in another day.That is, the experience dawned upon me the significance of care and consideration for other people. Since then, I have been as cooperative as possible whenever I am asked to improve my public behavior and I am always ready to get involved in such volunteer work.
In a sense, the highest reward for ones toil is not what they get from it but what they become by it.
简 评
吸烟有害，这个道理妇孺皆知，况且吸烟不仅对自己有害，还危及他人的健康。于是有了“戒烟日”。然而，劝人戒烟是辛苦的工作，例如作者所付出的努力。
作者有着很强的语言驾驭力，文字优美准确，意思表达到位，例如：“Embracing the philosophy of‘nothing ventured，nothing gained，，we summoned up a11 our courage，．．．”；“And l further found out that for this man，such words as‘good for your
health，．．．had long lost their appeal．”；“As the sinking sun timted the horizon，．．．”等等。
但在第二个例子的描述上，有些地方叙述有待商榷，例如：“In fact，you are extinguishing one cell Of lung cancer when you extinguish your cigarette．Youare extinguishing one cell“the disease Of selfishness when yOU extinguish your cigarette．”叙述重复，意思不很明朗。对此，作者似乎还可做进一步的修改。
总体说来，作者出彩的文字运用使本文的可读性很强。
第2个回答 2013-10-20
从内心深处说明抽烟的危害，说明是关心你，爱护你。
第3个回答 2008-01-01
我日，20分你就要我写10000字的保证书，你以为你这20分可以换20万哦！
起码2000分，要不我死也不写！哼！
起码2000分，要不我死也不写！哼！
第4个回答 2008-01-01
能不被发现么？除非你女朋友没有鼻子吧。
有什么好抽的啊。还写保证书？戒了不就得了。
有病。
有什么好抽的啊。还写保证书？戒了不就得了。
有病。
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