英语句子，不知道对不对，请大家看一看
the extremely profound and thought-provoking meaning , the cartoonist intends to convey us, reveals an extensively existing social phenomenon that it is imperative for us to take drastic measures.
"Simply designed as the drawing seems to be，it does demonstrate an extensively existing and thought-provoking social phenomenon that……" 同样没有语法错误. 此句的谓语是"demonstrate"(does起强调作用). "seems to be"是连词"as"引导的从句中的谓语,而非全句的谓语-- 我猜这是你的困惑.追问
你说的太好了，不愧是英语高手，呵呵，可以帮我改一下吗？谢谢你了，怎么改才能比较好呢？
追答I thought your quote was contextually incomplete. Either that, or you could make the article right by dropping the commas. I.e. "The extremely profound and thought-provoking meaning the cartoonist intends to convey us reveals an extensively existing social phenomenon that it is imperative for us to take drastic measures." - Takes a long breath. :) But this is probably part of what makes the serious formal writing. LOL
如果是做文献的话是可以的，但是让一般人看的话就很不通俗易懂。
其实说来说去就是这样一个意思：
it means that the the cartoonist wanna show us the existing social phenomenon which we need to take proper measures.本回答被网友采纳
这样应该比较有条理些！希望有帮助！追问
你看看这个句子有语法错误吗？呵呵，谢谢
Simply designed as the drawing seems to be，it does demonstrate an extensively existing and thought-provoking social phenomenon that……
seems to be，it does demonstrate 有冲突，改一下
追问怎么改呢？谢谢你
追答Design simple painting can also explain a widely exist and thought-through social phenomenon
