麻烦大家帮忙看看这段英文有什么语法错误没

Carol
Ann Duffy’s “Standing Female Nude” exposes the social injustice of gender by
depicting a female nude painted by a “genius”. By using the first person description,
the model reveals her unfavorable position comparing to the artist. With the
raising issue presenting by the model, the poem starts to challenge the
traditional perception of female and tries to bridge the gap between the model
and the artist. Nevertheless, audiences can still see the social injustice of gender
by bringing the painting disproved by the model to light at the end of the poem.

应该是 by using first person perspective, the不用加, 而且first person description 不是一个literary 形容词。
Rising issue, 不是raising
traditional perception of the female (因为强调女性, 所以要加the)

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第1个回答  2012-07-18
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请不要捣乱,谢谢

追答

好的 不好意思啦

第2个回答  2012-07-18
没有

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