请大家帮我看看我翻译的短文对不对,谢谢!

这是链接地址:http://s.hujiang.com/topic/209161/

按科学的美国国家科学院(NAS)最近的一份报告指出,全球变暖可能在没有警告下,导致地球环境的突然大举变化,让植物、动物和人类都没多少,甚至没有时间去适应。该报告警告说,在有记载的历史之中,未曾有过灾难性事件的破坏力会对未来人类文明和地球的寿命能产生如斯深远的影响。
一年前,联合国政府间气候变化专门委员会(IPCC)发表另一份报告,预测从现在到2100年,全球平均的表面温度很可能会上升摄氏1.4至5.8度。如果该预测成立,预测在未来十年的温度变化,将大于地球在过去一万年所经历的气候变化。
IPCC还发出了警告,将有不利于人类聚居地的影响,包括岛国和低洼国家会遭洪水泛滥、农作物减产,特别是在南半球,和热带疾病会传播到以前的温带区。
全球暖化呈现出工业时代的商业资产负债表阴暗面。
如果人类的成就是以对地球寿命造成的影响来衡量,那么全球变暖就是人类最显著的成就,尽管是负面的。
在不到一个世纪的光景,人们已经影响了地球的生物化学。
如果在未来的世纪气候突然 ——在十年内——发生变化,正如在地质历史上已发生过很多次,人类可能已自己编写了讣告。
若数万年后的后人回首看我们这个时代,很可能当今唯一的历史遗产就是地质记录了地球的气候有很大的变化,及其对生物圈的影响。

~~~~~~~~~纯人手翻译,供参考~~~~~~~~~

原文如下:
A recent report by the U.S. National Academy of Sciences ( NAS ) states that global warming could, without warning, cause a sudden wholesale change in the earth's environment, leaving little or no time for plants, animals and humans to adjust. No other disastrous event in recorded history will have had so damaging an impact on the future of human civilization and the life of the planet, the report warns.
A year ago the UN Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change ( IPCC ) issued another report predicting that global average surface temperature is likely to rise by 1.4 to 5.8 degrees centigrade between now and 2100. If that prediction holds, the change in temperature forecast for the next ten years will be lager than any climate change on earth in more than 10000 years.
The IPCC also warns of adverse impacts on human settlements, including the flood of island nations and low-lying countries, decreasing crop yields, especially in the southern hemisphere, and the spread of tropical deseases into previously temperature zones.
Global warming represents the dark side of the commercial balance sheet for the industrial age.
If human accomplishments were measured in terms of impact on the life of the planet, then global warming would be man's most significant accomplishment, albeit a negative one.
People have affected the biochemistry of the earth in less than a century.
If a climate change were to occur suddenly in the coming century - within less than 10 years, as has happened many times before in geological history - mankind may already have written its own obituary.
When future generations look back at this period tens of thousands of years from now, it is possible that today's only historical legacy will be in the geological record of a great change in the earth's climate and its impact on the biosphere.追问

非常感谢!能麻烦你帮我看看这篇文章吗,我不知道翻译得对不对!另外,非常希望向你请教一下把英语学好的方法,怎么才能翻译得对。
这是文章的链接地址:http://s.hujiang.com/topic/208908/

感激不尽!

追答

学外语没捷径!多看、多写、多听、多说!
这题都未结,就不去看别的了!

追问

感激!

追答

大意是掌握了,但细致之处不到位,仍有改善的空间。

温馨提示:内容为网友见解,仅供参考
第1个回答  2015-01-07
译文不太符合中文表达习惯,俺英语不太好,等高手来解~~~
第2个回答  2015-01-07
很拗口。。。 有很多地方有些出入~~~

请帮我看看这边短文,我翻译得大概正确吗?帮我指正好吗?感激不尽!
大体上是准确的,部分小地方翻译的比较拗口。但文章大意是清楚的。有两个问题。第一,branches of knowledge是一个常用用法,作为一个词组,泛指各个方面的知识,而不是将branches作分歧讲,联系上下文,行文应该如此。第二,these should not be allowed to turn our attention away from the sound,es...

一篇英语翻译,帮我看看翻的对不对,指出错误,谢谢
总体上翻译出了原文的意思, 但是太过局限于原文,显得表达不够简练。个别单词写错了,民族--ethnic groups。 用了太多的并列句,可以考虑使句型更多样化,句子结构更简练。 以第一句为例:如果我翻的话,Chinese, used by all ethnic groups in china, is one of the languages with long history and...

一篇英语翻译,帮我看看翻的对不对,指出错误,谢谢2
Chinese is a language used by all Chinese ethnic groups and it is also one of the languages with the development of the highest level and a longest history. Whether in the past or at present, Chinese language has a great influence at home and abroad and has a very important s...

麻烦看看我翻译的对不对,给改下,谢谢
As usual, the captain will go toLondonby ship.(没有错)演出期间,警察总是维持秩序。During the performance, the police always maintain the order.(always表示:总是)Spand most time in foreign countries.(把stand 改成spend)流行歌曲受到外国年轻人的赞扬。Pop songs are praised by foreign...

我翻译了一篇英文小短文,不知道翻译得对不对,请英语高手们帮忙看看,感 ...
原文:All of us communicate with one anothernonverbally,as well as with words.Most of time,we are not aware that we aredoing it .We gesture with eyebrows or a hand , meet someone else’s eyes andlook away,change positions in a chair.These actions we assume areoccasional....

帮我翻译一下四篇文章!顺便帮忙看看文章有没语法错误!谢谢!
第一篇:微笑!我们之所以这样说,几乎每一次我们照一张照片。什么是美好的词,什么美好采取的行动。难道你不希望我们大家有更多的笑脸在我们的生活?那么让我们来庆祝这一简单的小面的议案的网页或两个在我们的相册。难道你不喜欢看到的微笑爱的人?年轻或年老,一个微笑的脸,灯光显示了内在美的主题。

请大家帮我看看我写的这个短文里面有哪些错误
同学,这是我翻译的,你对照看看。。Today, I'd like to tell you a true story, it happened in three years ago, in the middle of the night I was surfing the Internet, after a while, I feel a little tired, I went to bed, I just lie down, I saw the roof there are a ...

谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里
She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.是also。Everyone like her very much.everyone是三单所以是likes。She is studies at No.10 Middle School。be动词后ing形式she is studing。She is good at Maths and running,too.这里math不能加s,也不用too。后面同理。Her hobbise are ...

请大家帮我翻译一下这段英语短文。谢谢了
你送给康康的生日礼物是什么?你猜。是一架模型飞机吗?不,再猜。额,你的生日礼物是什么形状的?他是圆形的。他是什么颜色的?它是黑色和白色的。我明白了,他是一个足球!是的,你是正确的。我可以看一看吗?抱歉,恐怕不能 望采纳~

谁可以帮我翻译一下这篇英语作文,还有帮我看看有没有语法错误, 兄弟们...
I like the pandas not only because they are one of the China's treasures, but also because they look cute.我喜欢熊猫不仅仅是因为它们是中国的国宝之一,还因为它们很可爱。Pandas look fat and hairy. 熊猫看上去胖胖的,毛茸茸的。They have only two colors: white and black.The panda'...

相似回答