Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher,Mr Sun,had passed away in a traffic accident.It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning.I couldn't accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.
Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher.He was full of sense of humour.We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching.His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class.He was an experienced teacher.
英语作文,帮我看看有没有什么语法错误?
您好！第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，你可以直接说I'm the monior of ...class .第二段At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attend...
英语作文,帮忙看看有什么语法错误?
1.if从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时 2.if从句用一般现在时，主句用may\/might\/canIf the fog gets thicker the plane may\/might be diverted.3.if从句用一般现在时，主句用must\/shouldIf you want to lose weight you must\/should eat less bread.4.if从句用一般现在时，主句用一般现在时 5...
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
1.He found that listening is more difficult .这句话，最好改成最高级，He found that listening is the most difficult.你本身句子并没有错误，但根据前后文，和其他2项做下比较，因为用最高级比较好点。2He couldn't understand every word。还有这句话，这话的意思是，他不懂任何一个词语。
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我 会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号 就行。2.中间有很多小句子，...
大家帮我看看这篇英语作文,请指出哪里有错,哪些句子需要改进,哪些句子...
I have a lot of admiration. But I think the most admirable people, or my mother, I also believe that my mother is the greatest person in the world.First of all, my mother is a kind man. She is kind hearted. It is not only helpful, but also not afraid of blackmail. ...
我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好
第一，语法错误 prefer to + sth\/doing sth， 所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.参加活动，一般要加介词in，所以join in your activities for i will have less homework than that i have now.z这一句than前后结构一样，要用省略，所以改成for ...
求大神们帮我看看我这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。 The story mainly...
to study→of studying if time went back, I would cherish it much more.Nowadays这个词太大，常译作：当下，限时。你不过是小时候没好好听课而已，用不上这麼大的词。For example的内容可以放进“我发现好多难题”这句中去。……总之吧，你这里用词和语法错误可谓错漏百出，建议重写。
请各位帮小妹妹看看这篇英文日记有没有语法错误?有的请指出,谢谢!
粗略浏览了一下 没发现什么语法错误～但是。。。这个。。。也太流水帐了吧。。。不过小学6年级的话。。。这个水平还不错。。。另外。。。最后一句话。。。“All of us had fun in Macau today”~~~这句话读起来实在是别扭 这样说应该比较好：What a wonderful day in Macau!~虽然这样说感觉...
英语作文 帮忙看看语法有哪些错误 能打多少分?按英语三级做参考_百度知 ...
老实说，这里边的错误太多了，不光是语法错误，还有很多的用词错误，改的话真的很难，如果满分100的话，我只能给60了，好好努力吧
