My favourite sport
My favourite sport is basketball. It is a very popular game in many countries,and both children and adults can play it. We can play it indoors or outdoors. It is much funnier than walking . And it’s also easier than skiing. It is good for our health. So now many Chinese people like to play basketball in their free time . My favourite player is Yao Ming. He plays basketball wonderfully. I hope I can play basketball as well as him.
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My favourite sport is basketball. It is a very popular game in many countries,and both children and adults can play it. We can play it indoors or outdoors. It is much funnier than walking . And it’s also easier than skiing. It is good for our health. So now many Chinese people like to play basketball in their free time . My favourite player is Yao Ming. He plays basketball wonderfully. I hope I can play basketball as well as him.
试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写作者动员运动的原因，全文主要用一般现在时。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 both... and， indoors or outdoors， in their free time , as well as; 比较级如 much funnier than，easier than；宾语从句 I can play basketball as well as him.以及固定句型如It is good for our health.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。
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第1个回答 2014-12-06
I have a good teacher .Her name is Jane. She has long curly black hair.She teaches us English.She has been a teacher for five years.She likes us very much and we all like her，too .She teaches so well that we are interested in English.I often ask her for help and she often helps me with my English.I can't get good grades without her help.Although she is very strict with us ，we all like her.She is my favorite teacher.本回答被提问者和网友采纳
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