求高手帮忙写一篇英文作文,80分!急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急

要求:观看电视节目《中世纪生活——医生篇》(《Life in the Middle Ages——The Doctor》),写一篇300字左右的英文作文。其实很简单,但我英语无能啊……

提示:根据内容以及感想两方面。

我现在有笔记(note),求大人们帮忙把笔记整理一下然后连成一篇作文!(请用过去式)因为笔记差不多就有三百字了,所以很好写!

笔记(节目内容):

第一小节
Medieval doctors studied in many books
Very different to doctors today(today: high technological)
Doctors didn’t preferred as surgery and dentists
Barbers preferred as surgery and dentists
Needed to understand stars and planets to understand the human body
They believed that there were four fluids (or humors) in human body : Blood, Yellow bile, Phlegm and Black bile
Pray before taking the operation
Penance → Pilgrimage(差不多就是朝拜的意思)→ take journal by foot→ pray the shine to healed

第二小节
Medicines were pretty strange
To break down fever = boil water
Health was related to religion
Drink garlic to guard from the evil spirit
Passed down generations(doctor)
They believed that earth was the center of the universe

第三小节
(in 1347)the Black Death spread over most parts if the europe (biggest disease in europe)
600 people died each day (doctors were helpless)
They believed that 1/3 of the population died
They burnt everything (house, human body) after people’s death
Now we discovered that black death was cause by fleas (now we call this disease Bubonic Plague)
Fear of unknown
Doctors didn't even discovered the fact that what caused the Black Death until late 18th century

第四小节
Towns were not healthy to live in because they were very crowded, and hygiene was very poor
Monastery has hospital
By 11th-12th century, hospitals were bulit all over the europe
Opened for all Christian
In hospital it had everything but no doctor
Doctors only treated rich and powerfull people
Doctors in medieval time were not useless, they helped break down feudal system a bit

笔记(节目排版,就是评价下节目)
People started with practising (some people were rehearsing,etc),(一开始节目有人在那边排练,然后一人说“start”就开始了)
The episode usually had a man who took the clapboard
Firsly talked about kinds of mistake, and the presenter usually said “cut” and told the truth about fact in medieval time
Presenter always talked to director(主持人在节目中经常跟导演对话,但导演只出声不出场),and told him the real story in medieval time
They mentioned a part called “Lowdown”
They had a part called “Straight to the point” : a guy dressed really modern, looked like a historian (holding a sword)
The episode also used medieval dressed people to talk about the fact or story
Used medieval paintings and drawings to explain what happened in medieval time
They sort of summarize in the last 5 minutes
不用管字数,因为笔记内容差不多就三百字了,多出很多也没关系

Medieval doctors studied in many books.TV program told us that they were very different to doctors today with high technology.At that time,doctors didn’t preferred as surgery and dentists.They only needed to understand stars and planets to understand the human body.In their views,they believed that there were four fluids in human body : Blood, Yellow bile,Phlegm and Black bile.Before taking the operation,praying was the most important rite.

What's more,in the Middle Ages,medicines were pretty strange.For instance,to break down fever ,doctors believed health was related to religion,so they asked the patients to drink garlic to guard from the evil spirit.Passed down generations,doctors believed that earth was the center of the universe.

In 1347,the Black Death,the biggest disease, spread over most parts of the europe .600 people died each day ,and doctors were helpless.They believed that 1/3 of the population died.People burnt everything (house, human body) after people’s death.Today,however, we discovered that black death (now we call this disease Bubonic Plague) was cause by fleas.Fear of unknown,medieval doctors didn't even discovered the fact that what caused the Black Death until late 18th century.

Towns were not healthy to live in because they were very crowded, and hygiene was very poor.Monastery was the only place that has hospital.By 11th-12th century, hospitals were bulit all over the Europe,but it only opened for all Christian.Although in hospital it had everything,there is no doctor,for they only treated rich and powerfull people.Doctors in medieval time were not useless, they helped break down feudal system a bit.

T^T 边吃饭边打了一个多小时 最后一段没弄明白。。。。。。水平不够 - - 见笑了。。。。
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第1个回答  2011-06-06
Dear Thomas,
How are you?We are going to hold a party this weekend.It is my honor to invite you to enjoy us.
Tomorrow,we will sing and dance.Making friends with other body in our class.
I am looking forward to seeing you atend our activity.
Yours
xxx
第2个回答  2011-06-06
traditional chinese medicine,with a history of thoudsands of years,unique and intergrated theorectical system,rich practical experience and good clinical effect,has been making great contribution to chinese people'health care and the development of chinese nation.It is a summary of the chinese people's experience in their struggle against disease. over the past few decades it has been attracting increasing attention from all over the world.
第3个回答  2011-06-06
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第4个回答  2011-06-07
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