求帮忙写一篇关于地震的英语文章~ 谢谢

60个字左右,不要网上翻译出来的,都是病句。

帮我写一篇吧~ 单词用的尽量简单一些,我期末考试要用,很重要! 可以加分~

May 12th is an ordinary day in 2008,it is in this day that shocking earthquake happened in Sichuan province,China.The earthquake destroyed nearly everything in Wenchuan country Sichuan province. It was terrible.We can't describle the scene what we saw with any words.Thousands of people were injured even died. And thousands of children became such unlucky ones who lost fathers or mothers , they longed to have families to continue their lives .I am sympathetic to their fate ! But I believed that we can fight against the fate and change it .For example ,there many people keeping living without food or water for about 100 hours during the earthquake!

What an unbelievable thing it is !their great spirits showed the powerful life vitality of humans!However,they must keep fighting against the death .Many schools were destroyed and there were many students and teachers who left us forever.Sadness,hoplessness and different kinds of danger spreaded out here and there !

But ,fortunately ,love is around us :the Communist party helps us ,the army helps us ,the people all over the world help us .They offer us with money ,goods ,love and so on !For example ,li lian ji, a warm-hearted man ,offered us with 20 million yuan !

With the help of the such a large love ,we will over come the damage of the earthquake and face our beautiful future !

blessed china ,united countrymen!

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- - 太长了把... 我写上去 英语老师都不信, 短点的~ 不要有语法错误啊~ 期末考试用的~ 谢谢啊~

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May 12th is an ordinary day in 2008,it is in this day that shocking earthquake happened in Sichuan province,China.The earthquake destroyed nearly everything in Wenchan county Sichuan province. It was terrible.We can't describle the scene what we saw with any words.thousands of people were injured even died. And thousands of children became such unlucky ones who lost fathers or mothers , they longed to have families to continue their lives .I am sympathetic to their fate ! But I believed that we can fight against the fate and change it .For example ,there many people keeping living without food or water for about 100 hours during the earthquake!

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第1个回答  2011-06-05
Since earthquake may cause great destrucktion,we need to learn how to detect them quickly.Animals always give us warnings.For example ,before an earthquake hens would not enter their cages;rats run out from their hiding places and march fearlessly throu houses;even normally quiet dogs bark in chorus all over town.Pigeons are especially noisy and fly in unuaual patterns.And most noticeable in a chemical change in ground water before a quake.
To prevent destruction of property ,the architects design columns and horizontal beams of equal strength.Besides the efforts toimprove building structures,people also should prepare their houses for the possibility of a great earthquake.It is advisable to check and reiforce their homes regularly.And remember to place heavy objects in low positions,attach cupboards and cabinets to walls,and the like .All these precautions can make a great difference in saving lives and preventing theloss of homes.追问

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