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随着我国经济的快速发展，社会的进步和个人收入大幅提高并且呈现集中趋势，人们对于个人财富的态度、观念和处理方式与过去相比发生了很大变化，个人理财逐渐成人们关注的焦点。由于竞争的加剧和利率市场化的深入，商业银行传统的公司类批发业务获利空间逐步缩小，信贷风险不断增加。而我国加入WTO后，外资银行又将以其雄厚的资金实力、灵活的经营机制、丰富的管理经验，重点争夺优质客户。日益加剧的市场竞争迫使国内商业银行开拓新的业务领域，寻求新的利润增长空间。个人理财业务以其领域广、批量多、风险小、个性化、收入稳定、附加值高等特点，成为商业银行生存与发展的必然趋势。在这样的背景下，如何抓住优质客户，占领客户市场，获取更大利润，迎接入世挑战；如何发展我国的个人理财业务，深化理财内涵，为客户提供更具个性化的服务，形成企业独特的文化，提高商业银行核心竞争力，将成为我国银行业亟待研究的问题。
本文通过我国银行业发展个人理财业务的情况，分析了制约国内个人理财业务发展的因素，并提出解决的对策。通过借鉴国外银行发展的经验，阐述了中国银行发展个人理财业务的思路、方法和策略，以期进一步深入理解个人理财业务的内涵，并能更有效地指导实际工作。
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随着我国经济的快速发展，社会的进步和个人收入大幅提高并且呈现集中趋势，人们对于个人财富的态度、观念和处理方式与过去相比发生了很大变化，个人理财逐渐成人们关注的焦点。
Along with the rapidly development of economic of China, the progress of society and drastically increased and centralized of personal incoming, people attitude, opinion and handling approaches of individual wealth have changed a lot from past, personal finance become into the focus of people gradually.
由于竞争的加剧和利率市场化的深入，商业银行传统的公司类批发业务获利空间逐步缩小，信贷风险不断增加。
Because of the exacerbation of competition and development of marketization of interest rate, the profits of wholesale business of traditional company of commercial bank are reduced step by step, and the risk of credit increased gradually.
而我国加入WTO后，外资银行又将以其雄厚的资金实力、灵活的经营机制、丰富的管理经验，重点争夺优质客户。
And after the affiliation of WTO of China, bank of foreign capital strived for the high-class customers as per their abundant capital, flexible managerial mechanism, and abundant managerial experience.
日益加剧的市场竞争迫使国内商业银行开拓新的业务领域，寻求新的利润增长空间。
More and more exacerbated market competition compelled domestic commercial banks expand new business area, search new profits increasing.
个人理财业务以其领域广、批量多、风险小、个性化、收入稳定、附加值高等特点，成为商业银行生存与发展的必然趋势。
Personal finance business become into the inevitable tendency of survival and development of commercial banks with the characters of wide business area, abundant wholesale, good credit risk, individuation, stable incoming, high addition value.
在这样的背景下，如何抓住优质客户，占领客户市场，获取更大利润，迎接入世挑战；如何发展我国的个人理财业务，深化理财内涵，为客户提供更具个性化的服务，形成企业独特的文化，提高商业银行核心竞争力，将成为我国银行业亟待研究的问题。
With this background, how to maintain high-class customers, occupy the customers market, gain more profits, confront challenge of affiliating of WTO; and how to develop the personal finance business, deepen the connotation of financial conducting, provide more characteristic service for customers, form the special culture of company, improve the core competitiveness of commercial bank, become the urgent problems to be solved of banking of China.
本文通过我国银行业发展个人理财业务的情况，分析了制约国内个人理财业务发展的因素，并提出解决的对策。
This article has analyzed the restriction of development of domestic personal finance and proposed the solutions according to the status of development of personal finance business of banking of China.
通过借鉴国外银行发展的经验，阐述了中国银行发展个人理财业务的思路、方法和策略，以期进一步深入理解个人理财业务的内涵，并能更有效地指导实际工作。
According to using for experience of foreign banking development, expounded the thinking, approaches and strategies of personal finance business development of banks of China, expecting to understand the connotation of personal finance business further more, and guide the practical works more efficiently.
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随着我国经济的快速发展，社会的进步和个人收入大幅提高并且呈现集中趋势，人们对于个人财富的态度、观念和处理方式与过去相比发生了很大变化，个人理财逐渐成人们关注的焦点。
Along with the rapidly development of economic of China, the progress of society and drastically increased and centralized of personal incoming, people attitude, opinion and handling approaches of individual wealth have changed a lot from past, personal finance become into the focus of people gradually.
由于竞争的加剧和利率市场化的深入，商业银行传统的公司类批发业务获利空间逐步缩小，信贷风险不断增加。
Because of the exacerbation of competition and development of marketization of interest rate, the profits of wholesale business of traditional company of commercial bank are reduced step by step, and the risk of credit increased gradually.
而我国加入WTO后，外资银行又将以其雄厚的资金实力、灵活的经营机制、丰富的管理经验，重点争夺优质客户。
And after the affiliation of WTO of China, bank of foreign capital strived for the high-class customers as per their abundant capital, flexible managerial mechanism, and abundant managerial experience.
日益加剧的市场竞争迫使国内商业银行开拓新的业务领域，寻求新的利润增长空间。
More and more exacerbated market competition compelled domestic commercial banks expand new business area, search new profits increasing.
个人理财业务以其领域广、批量多、风险小、个性化、收入稳定、附加值高等特点，成为商业银行生存与发展的必然趋势。
Personal finance business become into the inevitable tendency of survival and development of commercial banks with the characters of wide business area, abundant wholesale, good credit risk, individuation, stable incoming, high addition value.
在这样的背景下，如何抓住优质客户，占领客户市场，获取更大利润，迎接入世挑战；如何发展我国的个人理财业务，深化理财内涵，为客户提供更具个性化的服务，形成企业独特的文化，提高商业银行核心竞争力，将成为我国银行业亟待研究的问题。
With this background, how to maintain high-class customers, occupy the customers market, gain more profits, confront challenge of affiliating of WTO; and how to develop the personal finance business, deepen the connotation of financial conducting, provide more characteristic service for customers, form the special culture of company, improve the core competitiveness of commercial bank, become the urgent problems to be solved of banking of China.
本文通过我国银行业发展个人理财业务的情况，分析了制约国内个人理财业务发展的因素，并提出解决的对策。
This article has analyzed the restriction of development of domestic personal finance and proposed the solutions according to the status of development of personal finance business of banking of China.
通过借鉴国外银行发展的经验，阐述了中国银行发展个人理财业务的思路、方法和策略，以期进一步深入理解个人理财业务的内涵，并能更有效地指导实际工作。
According to using for experience of foreign banking development, expounded the thinking, approaches and strategies of personal finance business development of banks of China, expecting to understand the connotation of personal finance business further more, and guide the practical works more efficiently.
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第1个回答 2011-04-17
随着我国经济的快速发展，社会的进步和个人收入大幅提高并且呈现集中趋势，人们对于个人财富的态度、观念和处理方式与过去相比发生了很大变化，个人理财逐渐成人们关注的焦点。由于竞争的加剧和利率市场化的深入，商业银行传统的公司类批发业务获利空间逐步缩小，信贷风险不断增加。而我国加入WTO后，外资银行又将以其雄厚的资金实力、灵活的经营机制、丰富的管理经验，重点争夺优质客户。日益加剧的市场竞争迫使国内商业银行开拓新的业务领域，寻求新的利润增长空间。个人理财业务以其领域广、批量多、风险小、个性化、收入稳定、附加值高等特点，成为商业银行生存与发展的必然趋势。在这样的背景下，如何抓住优质客户，占领客户市场，获取更大利润，迎接入世挑战；如何发展我国的个人理财业务，深化理财内涵，为客户提供更具个性化的服务，形成企业独特的文化，提高商业银行核心竞争力，将成为我国银行业亟待研究的问题。
With China's rapid economic development, social progress and personal income increase and present concentration trend and people for personal wealth attitude, concepts and treatment compared with the past changed, personal finance gradually into the focus of attention. Due to increased competition and interest rate marketization deeply, commercial bank of traditional company profit space gradually narrowing wholesale business, credit risk increasing. And China's accession to the WTO, foreign bank and, with its abundant capital actual strength, of flexible management mechanism, the rich management experience, key for superior customer. Growing market competition forcing the domestic commercial Banks develop new business areas, seek new profit growth. In the field of the personal financial management business wide, batch much, risk small, individuation, stable income and value-added higher characteristic, become commercial Banks survival and the development tendency. Under such a background, how to seize the high quality customers, seizes the customer market, gain more profit, meet wto challenges; How to develop our personal finance business, deepening financial connotation, to provide more personalized service, forming enterprise unique culture, improving the commercial bank, will become the core competitiveness of China's banking problems to be studied.
本文通过我国银行业发展个人理财业务的情况，分析了制约国内个人理财业务发展的因素，并提出解决的对策。通过借鉴国外银行发展的经验，阐述了中国银行发展个人理财业务的思路、方法和策略，以期进一步深入理解个人理财业务的内涵，并能更有效地指导实际工作。
This article through the development of the personal financial management business in China's banking industry, analyzes the conditions restrict domestic individual financing business development of factors, and put forward the countermeasures. Through the experience of foreign Banks, this paper expounds the development bank of China, the development of the personal financial management business strategy, methods and strategies, in order to further understand the connotation of the personal financial management business, and can more effectively guide practical work.
With China's rapid economic development, social progress and personal income increase and present concentration trend and people for personal wealth attitude, concepts and treatment compared with the past changed, personal finance gradually into the focus of attention. Due to increased competition and interest rate marketization deeply, commercial bank of traditional company profit space gradually narrowing wholesale business, credit risk increasing. And China's accession to the WTO, foreign bank and, with its abundant capital actual strength, of flexible management mechanism, the rich management experience, key for superior customer. Growing market competition forcing the domestic commercial Banks develop new business areas, seek new profit growth. In the field of the personal financial management business wide, batch much, risk small, individuation, stable income and value-added higher characteristic, become commercial Banks survival and the development tendency. Under such a background, how to seize the high quality customers, seizes the customer market, gain more profit, meet wto challenges; How to develop our personal finance business, deepening financial connotation, to provide more personalized service, forming enterprise unique culture, improving the commercial bank, will become the core competitiveness of China's banking problems to be studied.
本文通过我国银行业发展个人理财业务的情况，分析了制约国内个人理财业务发展的因素，并提出解决的对策。通过借鉴国外银行发展的经验，阐述了中国银行发展个人理财业务的思路、方法和策略，以期进一步深入理解个人理财业务的内涵，并能更有效地指导实际工作。
This article through the development of the personal financial management business in China's banking industry, analyzes the conditions restrict domestic individual financing business development of factors, and put forward the countermeasures. Through the experience of foreign Banks, this paper expounds the development bank of China, the development of the personal financial management business strategy, methods and strategies, in order to further understand the connotation of the personal financial management business, and can more effectively guide practical work.
第2个回答 2011-04-16
With China's rapid economic development, social progress and personal income increase and present concentration trend and people for personal wealth attitude, concepts and treatment compared with the past changed, personal finance gradually into the focus of attention. Due to increased competition and interest rate marketization deeply, commercial bank of traditional company profit space gradually narrowing wholesale business, credit risk increasing. And China's accession to the WTO, foreign bank and, with its abundant capital actual strength, of flexible management mechanism, the rich management experience, key for superior customer. Growing market competition forcing the domestic commercial Banks develop new business areas, seek new profit growth. In the field of the personal financial management business wide, batch much, risk small, individuation, stable income and value-added higher characteristic, become commercial Banks survival and the development tendency. Under such a background, how to seize the high quality customers, seizes the customer market, gain more profit, meet wto challenges; How to develop our personal finance business, deepening financial connotation, to provide more personalized service, forming enterprise unique culture, improving the commercial bank, will become the core competitiveness of China's banking problems to be studied
第3个回答 2011-04-16
With the rapid development of our economy, social progress and substantially increase personal income and has concentrated trend, the individual wealth, and handling compared with the changed greatly. management has become the focus of attention. as competition intensifies and interest rates of commercialization, the traditional commercial banks of the profits of the wholesale trade gradually narrowed, the credit risk on the increase. but china's entry into wto. foreign banks and their strong Financial strength and flexibility to operate, manage and key for the good customer. increasing market competition have force the domestic commercial banks to open up new business and seek new profits in space. financial services sector, by its mass, little risk, personalization, income is stable and high added value and the commercial banks to live with the inevitable trend of development. in such a background, how to get customer, the quality of the market and reap higher , To meet the challenge to the development of china's wto entry ； personal financial business, the financial implications and provide a more personalized service, the unique culture and commercial banks will become the core competitiveness of our banking industry to study the issue. this calls our banking development via financial services. analysed by the financial business, and resolving them. through the development of this experience, the chinese
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第4个回答 2011-04-16
With China's rapid economic development, social progress and personal income increase and present concentration trend and people for personal wealth attitude, concepts and treatment compared with the past changed, personal finance gradually into the focus of attention. Due to increased competition and interest rate marketization deeply, commercial bank of traditional company profit space gradually narrowing wholesale business, credit risk increasing. And China's accession to the WTO, foreign bank and, with its abundant capital actual strength, of flexible management mechanism, the rich management experience, key for superior customer. Growing market competition forcing the domestic commercial Banks develop new business areas, seek new profit growth. In the field of the personal financial management business wide, batch much, risk small, individuation, stable income and value-added higher characteristic, become commercial Banks survival and the development tendency. Under such a background, how to seize the high quality customers, seizes the customer market, gain more profit, meet wto challenges; How to develop our personal finance business, deepening financial connotation, to provide more personalized service, forming enterprise unique culture, improving the commercial bank, will become the core competitiveness of China's banking problems to be studied.
This article through the development of the personal financial management business in China's banking industry, analyzes the conditions restrict domestic individual financing business development of factors, and put forward the countermeasures. Through the experience of foreign Banks, this paper expounds the development bank of China, the development of the personal financial management business strategy, methods and strategies, in order to further understand the connotation of the personal financial management business, and can more effectively guide practical work.
This article through the development of the personal financial management business in China's banking industry, analyzes the conditions restrict domestic individual financing business development of factors, and put forward the countermeasures. Through the experience of foreign Banks, this paper expounds the development bank of China, the development of the personal financial management business strategy, methods and strategies, in order to further understand the connotation of the personal financial management business, and can more effectively guide practical work.
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