急!!!求高手翻译一下这段话···200分相送···

敬爱的先生/女士:
您好!
我是长江大学的一名大四学生,即将踏入社会的我对未来充满着期待,我相信“Well begun is half done”,(好的开端是成功的一半)。我希望贵公司就是我成功的起点,我能有幸同贵公司一起共创明日的辉煌。
我出生于武汉,06年我考入了长江大学,从此翻开了我人生新的篇章。在校期间,努力学好专业知识的同时,还注重个人综合素质的培养。我一直担任班级的班长职务,繁忙的工作不仅培养和锻炼了我的工作能力,更加锻炼了我的组织与协调,解决问题的能力。另外,我还积极参加各种活动,拓宽自己的知识面。努力提高自己的英文与计算机水平。
“海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞”,我希望贵公司能给我一个施展才华的机会,我一定会努力工作,勤奋学习专业知识,不负公司给我的厚望。

以下绝对不是翻译机器。人工所为。若没有加200分,我找你算账

敬爱的先生/女士: 您好!
Hello, Ladies and Gentlemen:
我是长江大学的一名大四学生,即将踏入社会的我对未来充满着期待,
I'm a student from Chang Jiang University. I will soon join the big society and am looking forward to the future.
我相信“Well begun is half done”,(好的开端是成功的一半)。
I believe the saying"Well begun is half done"
我希望贵公司就是我成功的起点,我能有幸同贵公司一起共创明日的辉煌。
I hope XX(他们公司的名字) will be my first step towards success. And I wish I could have the chance to accomplish achievements together with XX.(闯辉煌老外听不懂,只能说共同做出成绩)
我出生于武汉,06年我考入了长江大学,从此翻开了我人生新的篇章。
I was born in Wu Han. In 2006, I entered Chang Jiang Univ. , which was a new start of my life.(什么人生的篇章,翻译成英文人家听不懂的)
在校期间,努力学好专业知识的同时,还注重个人综合素质的培养。
During my school time, I pay attention to not only the professional knowledge, but also the comprehensive quality.
我一直担任班级的班长职务,繁忙的工作不仅培养和锻炼了我的工作能力,更加锻炼了我的组织与协调,解决问题的能力。
I have been a monitor in the class. The busy work not only improved my working ability, but also enhance my ability of organizing and problem solving.
另外,我还积极参加各种活动,拓宽自己的知识面。努力提高自己的英文与计算机水平。
Moreover, I have attended all kinds of activities to enlarge my knowledge. Also, great progress has been made in my English and computer operating.(计算机水平,用level别人肯定听不懂,只有说计算机操作上有进步)
“海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞”,我希望贵公司能给我一个施展才华的机会,我一定会努力工作,勤奋学习专业知识,不负公司给我的厚望。
There is a Chinese saying,:" Fish enjoys a good swim in broad ocean and Bird soars in clean sky". I just want an opportunity to show my talent, just like the bird and fish. If your company give me the chance, I will surely work and study hard, being worth of your trust.

翻译的好辛苦,你那么多中国式的话,很难翻译。请注意千万不能用洋泾浜英语,否则别人会质疑你的水平。强烈要求加分!
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第1个回答  2009-05-20
Distinguished Ladies and Gentlemen:
How are you?
I'am a senior student in Yangtze University,since I am going to step into the society I am looking forward to the future.I believe"Well begun is half done".I wish your company will be the starting point of my success,and I feel so honored to have this opportunity to work in your company to creat a brilliant future together.
I was born in Wuhan,and entered Yangtze University in 2006,from then on a new chapter of my life opened.During my colleague life,I attach great impotrance to the cultivation of the personal diathesis along with work hard with my professional knowledge,. I always on the duty as a class monitor, the hectic works not noly cultivate and practice my working ability but also improve my capability of organization and coordination and resolution of the problems. Moreover, I also activly participate in various activities, expand my own knowledge of the world.Make great efforts to improve my English and computer levels.
“The field of activity is vast with brilliant prospects where much can be accomplished”,I hope that your company will give me an opportunity to let my rich talent to a full play,I assure to work hard,and diligently learn the professional knowledge,I won't let you be disappointed

累死我了,好多的,每句话都是手工翻的,希望对你有帮助~本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2009-05-20
Dear Sir / Madam:
Hello!
I am a senior at the University of the Yangtze River students, we are going into the community and I look forward to the future is full of, I believe that "Well begun is half done", (a good start is half the success). I hope that the success of your company is my starting point, I had the privilege to work together with your company to create a brilliant tomorrow.
I was born in Wuhan, in 2006 I entered the University of the Yangtze River, then opened a new chapter in my life. While studying at the school, and strive to improve professional knowledge, but also the overall quality of personal training. I have duties as a squad leader classes, a busy train and exercise not only my ability to work, more training of my organization and coordination, problem-solving abilities. In addition, I also actively participated in various activities to broaden their knowledge. Strive to improve their level of English and computer.
"Sea diving with width, height鸟飞days", I hope you can give me an opportunity to display their talent, I will work hard, study hard and expertise to live up to my expectations of the company.
希望你可以成功
第3个回答  2009-05-20
My honorific ladies and gentleman:
Honor to be here!
I am a senior student from Changjiang University.I feel hopefull about my future as I am going to work,and believe that " Well begun is half done".I hope this company to be a start of my sucess.It is my honor to create a bright future with our company.
I was born in Wuhan。I was getting to uniersity in 2006,and it 's a new part of my life.At school,I emphasize at my personal comprehensive quality while working hard to study my professional knowledge.I am the class monitor .I gain great experience from those jobs and make me good at organizing and solving problems.Also,I attend all kinds of activities ,which wider my knowledge,improve my English and computer.
"Sky is so wide that birds can fly freely, and the sea is so broad that fishes can swin and jump",I hope you could offer me a chance to display my talent.I will work hard and learn more professional knowledge,do my best to satisfy you.
第4个回答  2009-05-20
Dear Sir / Madam:
Hello!
I am a senior at the University of the Yangtze River students, we are going into the community and I look forward to the future is full of, I believe that "Well begun is half done", (a good start is half the success). I hope that the success of your company is my starting point, I had the privilege to work together with your company to create a brilliant tomorrow.
I was born in Wuhan, in 2006 I entered the University of the Yangtze River, then opened a new chapter in my life. While studying at the school, and strive to improve professional knowledge, but also the overall quality of personal training. I have duties as a squad leader classes, a busy train and exercise not only my ability to work, more training of my organization and coordination, problem-solving abilities. In addition, I also actively participated in various activities to broaden their knowledge. Strive to improve their level of English and computer.
"Sea diving with width, height鸟飞days", I hope you can give me an opportunity to display their talent, I will work hard, study hard and expertise to live up to my expectations of the company
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