英语四级

1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象
2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性
3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做
Attend your classes on time
It is a common phenomenon that students in college attend their classes not on time and leave the classroom before the class is over and even do not take their classes at present.
The rate of attendence,the basic of study,is significant for college education.You can catch the step with the others if you listen to the teacher carefully in the classroom.Besides,there is no teacher hopes that the absence of many students in his course.I think that teachers will be so enthusiastic that do their best to teach us in case that the classroom is full of students.
As students,what we should do are attend classes regularly and on time and be serious in it.And someday we will benefit from it.
我写的四级作文，大家看下有什么需要改进的地方，顺便估计下分数哈（15分满分）
嘿嘿，我已经很注意不chinglish了。哎，还是没办法。
class is over 有这种用法的。
I think that teachers will be so enthusiastic that do their best to teach us in case that the classroom is full of students
that引导的从句。classroom是主语啊。
what we should do to attend classes
而且这句句子不通
怎么不通了，说具体点啊。

students in college don't attend their classes on time （这样感觉句型比较到位）
before the class over （over在此为动词）
basic of study是想表达什么意思？
catch the step with the 是不是想表达赶上？ 用catch up with sb。
或者catch one's step
there is no teacher hopes that the absence of many students in his course
that引导的从句后面怎么没有谓语？

I think that teachers will be so enthusiastic that do their best to teach us in case that the classroom is full of students
that引导的从句没主语

As students 改成 As a student
what we should do are to attend classes
而且这句句子不通

楼主 以上只是我的个人意见
我也不知道这个能得多少分
还是希望你努力 不要太Chinglish
多背背总是有好处的

class is over 有这种用法的。(恩 我反应过来了 很久没有用都忘了)

I think that teachers will be so enthusiastic that do their best to teach us in case that the classroom is full of students
that引导的从句。classroom是主语啊。
（so that 是固定搭配就不多说了
然后that在这里是引导一个宾语从句
然而do their best to teach us并不是一个完整的句子
e.g。 he is so dirty that no one wants to touch him）
所以这句要不然就写成teachers will be so enthusiastic that they will do their best to teach us

what we should do are to attend classes
而且这句句子不通
怎么不通了，说具体点啊。
what we should do are attend classes regularly and on time and be serious in it.And someday we will benefit from it.
首先是一句话里面不能有两个谓语 do 和 are在句子都出现了
所以建议你采用不定式
what we should do is to attend classes
然后就是感觉你的句子有一点冗长 第一句和最后一句都是这样

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