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    随着嵌入式技术的发展，如何让用户通过浏览器访问嵌入式系统中内置Web 服务器，以获取系统信息成为嵌入式系统设计的一个热点。web服务不但操作方便，而且可以实现对现场的远程监控, 甚至可以向监控设备发送指令，因此Web 服务在嵌入式系统中的实现具有重要的作用，由于嵌入式系统要求代码简练，执行效率高,性能稳定可靠等，因此选择合适的Web服务器显得尤为重要。本设计采用一款单任务的嵌入式Web 服务器Boa. 对Boa web服务器特点，如何搭建以及注意事项等进行了讨论, 在此基础上编写了后台cgi服务程序,对嵌入式设备中传感器采集到的数据通过网络和浏览器传递给用户，以使用户了解嵌入式设备的工作状态和采集到的信息。

    With the development of embeded technology, how to permit the users to visit the built-in web server in the embeded system so as to obtain the system information has become a hot point of embeded system designing. With the features of convenient operation，remote control toward the work field and even sending orders to the monitoring equipment, the web server plays an important role in the realization of embeded system. Because the embeded system demands a simple code with a high executive efficiency and stable performance, users have to be cuatious enough to choose suitable web server. The design has adopted the embeded system Boa with simple task, and discussed the features of Boa web server, how to set up and some instructions that need to be noted，and meanwhile, on which base, compiled backgrounding cgi service procedure，transmitted the users the datas collected by the sensors in embeded equipments through the website and explorer. In this way, users can have a clear understanding of working conditions of embeded equipment and datas collected.
    请大家说明的详细些，大小写，句式，时态哪里有错误都说明白点，谢谢大家了，最好有专业人员帮忙，兄弟急求！

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    相关建议   2009-06-16
    With the development of embedding technology, how to permit users to visit the built-in web server in the embeded system so as to obtain the system information has become a hot point of embedded system design.
    embed加ed应该是embedded, 但是要说embedding technology, users不是特指的, 因此不能用the users, embedded system, 不必说system designing, 用design也可以是名词

    With the convenient operation features, you can remote control field work and even send orders to monitoring equipment. The web server plays an important role in the realization of the embedded system. Because the embedded system demands a simple code with high executive efficiency and stable performance, users have to be cuatious enough to choose a suitable web server.
    中文逗号是不用在英语中的, With the features of convenient operation, 改成 With the convenient operation features; remote control前面加上主谓语yuo can; toward the work field改成field work; sending改成send; 删除monitoring equipment前的the; 删除high executive efficiency前的a, efficiency不可数; suitable web server前要加a

    The design has adopted the embedded system Boa with simple tasks, and discussed the features of Boa web server, how to set it up and some instructions that need to be noted, and meanwhile, on which base, compiled background cgi service procedure, transmitted the users the data collected by the sensors in embedded equipment through the website and explorer. This way, users can have a clear understanding of working conditions of embedded equipment and the data collected.
    改task为tasks复数; data不用datas为复数; set up改成set it up; backgrounding改成后台background, backgrounding是后接地, 不是后台; equipment不能用复数, 是不可数名词; 删除In, 只说This way就可以; 最后, 在data collected前要加the, 这里是有所指的, 也可以说the collected data

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    第1个回答  2009-06-16
    我是非专业的，时态错误之类的看不出来。
    但是我觉得你用得长句太多了，尽量用短句。不要一个从句套一个从句的。一句话。你看你自己翻译的，一个句子就有3行，实在太长了。
    句子稍稍简单了，出错的概率就小了。
    貌似说了点费话，希望对你有用.
    第2个回答  2009-06-16
    写一些语法方面的改善建议：
    1、how to permit the users to visit the built-in web server in the embeded system so as to obtain the system information has become a hot point of embeded system designing这个句子主语太长，建议使用it 做形式主语，会更好些。
    2、With the features of convenient operation，remote control toward the work field and even sending orders to the monitoring equipment缺少主语，这个句子可以用not only ，but also写
    3、a simple code with a high executive efficiency and stable performance有误，代码简练，执行效率高,性能稳定可靠，三者是并列关系。
    4、cuatious拼写错误
    5、因此选择合适的Web服务器显得尤为重要 你的有点乱，我重新翻一下it appears more important to select appropriate WEB server
    6、meanwhile，前去掉and
    以上，希望有用。
    第3个回答  2009-06-16
    随着嵌入式技术的发展，如何使用户能够访问内置的Web服务器的嵌入式系统，以获得该系统的信息已成为一个热点的嵌入式系统设计。的特点，操作方便，实现远程控制的工作领域，甚至发出订单的监测设备，在Web服务器中起着重要的作用，实现嵌入式系统。由于嵌入式系统的要求简单的代码执行效率高，性能稳定，用户必须cuatious足以选择合适的Web服务器。设计采用了嵌入式系统宝儿与简单的任务，并讨论了特征宝儿Web服务器，如何设置和一些指示，必须指出，同时，在这基础，汇编backgrounding的CGI服务程序，转交了用户所收集的数据的传感器，在嵌入式设备通过网站和浏览器。这样，用户就可以清楚地了解工作条件，嵌入式设备和数据收集。

    随着嵌入式技术的发展，如何使用户能够访问内置的Web服务器的嵌入式系统，以获得该系统的信息已成为一个热点的嵌入式系统设计。的特点，操作方便，实现远程控制的工作领域，甚至发出订单的监测设备，在Web服务器中起着重要的作用，实现嵌入式系统。由于嵌入式系统的要求简单的代码执行效率高，性能稳定，用户必须cuatious足以选择合适的Web服务器。设计采用了嵌入式系统宝儿与简单的任务，并讨论了特征宝儿Web服务器，如何设置和一些指示，必须指出，同时，在这基础，汇编backgrounding的CGI服务程序，转交了用户所收集的数据的传感器，在嵌入式设备通过网站和浏览器。这样，用户就可以清楚地了解工作条件，嵌入式设备和数据收集。
    性能，用户必须cuatious足以选择合适的Web服务器。设计采用了嵌入式系统宝儿与简单的任务，并讨论了特征宝儿Web服务器，如何设置和一些指示，必须指出，同时，在这基础，汇编backgrounding的CGI服务程序，转交了用户所收集的数据的传感器，在嵌入式设备通过网站和浏览器。这样，用户就可以清楚地了解工作条件，嵌入式设备和数据收集。

    用了5个网站翻译，几乎是对的，以上是其中的2个。
    第4个回答  2009-06-18
    How let a consumer have the Web server built-in by the fact that the browser visits implantation style in system, to gain system information becoming a hot spot that dyadic system of implantation designs with implanting development of dyadic technology. The web is served handling long-range supervisory control go to the lavatory, and can come true to the scene not only , can dispatch instruction to monitoring equipment even, Web realization in serving in implanting dyadic system has the important effect therefore , the server waiting for Web , choosing therefore rightly since dyadic system of implantation requires that the code is succinct , carry out is efficient , the function is stable reliably appears especially important. Design dyadic implantation Web server Boa adopt one Shan mission originally. To Boa web server characteristic, how numerous and repeated build as well as matters needing attention waits to have been in progress discuss that, have compiled and composed backstage cgi servicer here on the basis, the data that sensor acquisition arrives at transfers give the consumer, messenger consumer know the duty implanting dyadic equipment and collect the information arriving at to implanting style in equipment by the network and the browser.
    第5个回答  2009-06-18
    With the development of embedded technology, how to allow users to access through a browser embedded in the built-in Web server system to obtain system information of the embedded system design has become a hot topic. web services is not only easy to operate, and can achieve the remote monitoring of the scene, or even send commands to the monitoring equipment, so Web services in the realization of embedded systems play an important role, as the simple code embedded system requirements, the implementation of high efficiency, such as stable and reliable performance, so select the appropriate Web server seems particularly important. The design uses a single-task embedded Web server Boa.
    Characteristics of the Boa web server, how to set up and pay attention to such matters were discussed, in this based on the background cgi service program for embedded devices in the sensor data collected through the network and delivered to the user browser so that users understand the work of the state of embedded devices and the information collected.

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