Task:Study
the
following
sentences
and
try
to
improve
them.
任务：仔细阅读以下句子并尝试改进它们。
1.We
thought
she
was
charming,intelligent,and
a
very
capable
young
woman.
我们认为她是个迷人、聪明和很有能力的女人。
改为：We
thought
she
was
charming,
intelligent,
and
very
capable.
2.Looking
out
of
the
window,the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
向窗外望去，草场绵延不绝直至视力所及。
改为：Outside
the
window,
the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
3.On
entering
the
classroom,the
students
stood
up
and
said“Good
morning!”
（老师）进了教室，学生们起立并说“早上好！”
改为：When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom,
the
students
stood
up
and
said
"Good
morning!"
4.I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,because
he
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
我要去上现代中国戏剧讲座，因为他是我喜欢的剧作家。
改为：I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,
because
the
lecturer
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
5.We
have
great
faith
and
high
hopes
for
her.
我们对她寄予厚望。
改为：We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
6.It
is
better
to
give
than
take.
给予比索取好。
改为：It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.
the
following
sentences
and
try
to
improve
them.
任务：仔细阅读以下句子并尝试改进它们。
1.We
thought
she
was
charming,intelligent,and
a
very
capable
young
woman.
我们认为她是个迷人、聪明和很有能力的女人。
改为：We
thought
she
was
charming,
intelligent,
and
very
capable.
2.Looking
out
of
the
window,the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
向窗外望去，草场绵延不绝直至视力所及。
改为：Outside
the
window,
the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
3.On
entering
the
classroom,the
students
stood
up
and
said“Good
morning!”
（老师）进了教室，学生们起立并说“早上好！”
改为：When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom,
the
students
stood
up
and
said
"Good
morning!"
4.I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,because
he
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
我要去上现代中国戏剧讲座，因为他是我喜欢的剧作家。
改为：I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,
because
the
lecturer
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
5.We
have
great
faith
and
high
hopes
for
her.
我们对她寄予厚望。
改为：We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
6.It
is
better
to
give
than
take.
给予比索取好。
改为：It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.
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第1个回答 2020-02-26
改错题（修改句子）
1.
在a和very之间加was（这题不是太肯定，如果只改一处就只能这样修改。感觉句子不太通顺，最好是改成We
thought
she
was
a
very
capable
young
woman,
charming
and
intelligent）
2.
eye变成复数eyes
3.
On改成Upon
（这是语法上的修改，但根据实际情况，我觉得前面部分应该改成When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom）
4.
这句语法上没有错，后面半句可以考虑改成because
I
like
that
dramatist
5.
在faith后面加in
6.
take前面加to
1.
在a和very之间加was（这题不是太肯定，如果只改一处就只能这样修改。感觉句子不太通顺，最好是改成We
thought
she
was
a
very
capable
young
woman,
charming
and
intelligent）
2.
eye变成复数eyes
3.
On改成Upon
（这是语法上的修改，但根据实际情况，我觉得前面部分应该改成When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom）
4.
这句语法上没有错，后面半句可以考虑改成because
I
like
that
dramatist
5.
在faith后面加in
6.
take前面加to
第2个回答 2019-01-03
题目要求：阅读并改善下列句子
句子都有一些语法错误，需要改正。
1.
We
thought
she
is
charming,intelligent,
and
a
very
capable
young
woman.(陈述事实用一般现在时）
2.
Looking
out
of
the
window,
the
eye
can
see
as
far
as
the
grassland
stretches.(looking
out的逻辑主语应该是the
eye而不是the
grassland）
3.
On
teacher's
entering
the
classroom,....(
4.
....,
because
he
is
the
dramatist
I
like.(特指)
5.
We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
(固定搭配)
6.
It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.(一致性)
句子都有一些语法错误，需要改正。
1.
We
thought
she
is
charming,intelligent,
and
a
very
capable
young
woman.(陈述事实用一般现在时）
2.
Looking
out
of
the
window,
the
eye
can
see
as
far
as
the
grassland
stretches.(looking
out的逻辑主语应该是the
eye而不是the
grassland）
3.
On
teacher's
entering
the
classroom,....(
4.
....,
because
he
is
the
dramatist
I
like.(特指)
5.
We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
(固定搭配)
6.
It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.(一致性)
第3个回答 2019-07-23
1.把
a
放到charming
前面
we
thought
she
was
a
charming,
intelligent
and
very
capable
young
woman.
我们觉得她是一个很迷人，聪明
并且非常有能力的年轻女士。
2
3
同上
4
把on
换成of
或者直接说modern
Chinese
drama
lecture,
后半部分可以说
because
i
like
the
dramatist.
5
同上
a
放到charming
前面
we
thought
she
was
a
charming,
intelligent
and
very
capable
young
woman.
我们觉得她是一个很迷人，聪明
并且非常有能力的年轻女士。
2
3
同上
4
把on
换成of
或者直接说modern
Chinese
drama
lecture,
后半部分可以说
because
i
like
the
dramatist.
5
同上
第4个回答 2019-12-11
任务：研究下列句子并设法加以改进。
1.我以为她是可爱，聪明，和一个非常有能力的年轻女子。
2.看向窗外，草原绵延尽可能的眼睛可以看到。
3.进入课堂，学生们站起来，说：
“早上好！
”
4.艾米去演讲对现代中国戏剧，因为他是一个戏剧家我喜欢。
5.我有很大的诚意和寄予厚望的她。
6。这个比那个更好
1.我以为她是可爱，聪明，和一个非常有能力的年轻女子。
2.看向窗外，草原绵延尽可能的眼睛可以看到。
3.进入课堂，学生们站起来，说：
“早上好！
”
4.艾米去演讲对现代中国戏剧，因为他是一个戏剧家我喜欢。
5.我有很大的诚意和寄予厚望的她。
6。这个比那个更好
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