请各位高手帮忙看一下。马上就要面试了。中英文的自我介绍。看看有什么地方需要修改和添加的。谢谢啊

各位评委老师下午好:我的名字叫做XXX。20岁。身高180公分。体重75公斤。喜欢看书和音乐。我来自于四川广元。现就读于电子科技大学成都学院。空乘及地面服务专业。于大学1年学习中。先后取得了英语3级和普通话2级甲等证书。积极参加学校组织的各种活动。乐于助人。凡是需要帮忙的同学和老师。我都会用自己最大的能力去帮助他们。很荣幸参加这此面试。希望贵公司能给我这次机会。我将会用我的行动证明我自己。

Good afternoon teachers judge you: My name is XXX. 20 years old. Height 180 cm. Weight 75 kg. Like reading and music. I come from Guangyuan, Sichuan. Now studying at the University of Electronic Science and Technology, Chengdu Institute. Flight attendants and ground service professional. 1 year study at the university. Has achieved level 3 in English and Putonghua two A-level certificate. Actively participated in various activities organized by the school. Helpful. Those who need help the students and teachers. I will use my best abilities to help them. Am honored to participate in this in this interview. Hope you can give me this opportunity. I will use my actions to prove myself.

筒子,你是面试啥东西?如果是公司的话,你说的太嫩了,没说到点上。
中文自我介绍,你得改改,问候是要的,不过面试的怎么是评委老师呢,你直接问候大家好了就行了,然后简单的自我介绍:
大家好,我叫xx,男,(说性别的时候,可以加下一点动作,比较特别的点,也能引起大家对你的兴趣)今年20岁,来自美丽的四川广元,是电子科技大学成都学院的空乘及地面服务专业大一的学生。在校期间,除了在学业上先后取得了英语3级和普通话2级甲等证书,在也课余时间也积极参加校内外的一些活动(如果有组织过活动就说下,没有就简单的说下你都参加了什么活动),从而提高了我的团队协作能力,沟通能力和学习能力。个人性格外向,做事沉着冷静,有条理,乐于助人,关心他人。今天我来到这里,希望给自己一个体验的机会,我也相信自己能做好自己要做的事情,(如果是应聘什么职位的,那就加一句,我也相信凭我目前掌握的技能,高度的责任感和良好的学习能力,适应能力,完全能胜任这工作),谢谢。
男孩子就该大气点,有自信点。
英语自我介绍嘛,其实大概就听下你的口音而已,内容嘛不会太注重的,我给你个样板你模仿下:
Good afternoon, my name is XX.
It is really a great honor to be here.
I hope I can make a good
performance today.
Now I will introduce myself briefly.

I am 20 years old. I was born in Sichuan Guangyuan,
I am freshman of Chengdu University of Electronic Science and Technology Institute,my major is xxx.
I have passed English III and Putonghua. and i have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time.
I am an outgoing and hardworking guy.I am open-minded ,quick in thought .I have lots of interest such as playing basektall,badminton.
so,If you give me the great chance,I won't let you disappoint.Ok,
that's all.
Thank you.
I hope that you will be satisfied with me,
thank you again.
记得介绍要熟记,英语方面的话,说的不好没关系,内容上没几个人会听的,主要是口音上,要多练练,说的比较正的话,对你来说是过关的关键,最好模仿下美音怎么说的。
good luck.
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第1个回答  2010-11-18
还可以,不过不明白Good afternoon teachers judge you是什么意思。是不是要改下?
第2个回答  2010-11-18
再把语句理理 不太通顺啊
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