请帮忙修改一下英语作文，谢谢
This picture shows a cellphone on a pair of hands.The cellphone is commented not the original edition.That means many people steal others technolege and produce products not the original edition.They sell those cellphone at low price in market ,so that bring a lot of loss to the original edition company who has the right of the products .
This phenomenon is very common. Government has made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks this phenomenon is till alive . I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will stop this bad phenomenon too. Let us respect others's brain hard work ,and let us make a harmonius society like a warm family .
图为一双手捧着一部手机，但是旁边写着 山寨 的字样。 让写一篇作文。
请高人帮忙看看，修改一下我的作文。多提宝贵意见。谢谢。
This phenomenon is very common. THE government haD made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks LIKE this phenomenon is Still aCTIve . I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will TRY TO stop this bad phenomenon too. Let us respect others's brain, KNOWLEDGE AND hard work ,and let us make a harmonius society like a warm family .
This phenomenon is very common. Government has made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks this phenomenon is still flourish. I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will stop this bad phenomenon as well. Let us respect other's intellectual property rights, and let us make a harmonious society like a warm family.
我用word检查了一下 修改后 应该没有错误了 写作文用word写会报错的 你作文问题不是很大 问题在于你的单词拼写上面有错！多注意单词的写法 不要知道是什么 但是拼写的时候出错就不值得了
请大家帮忙修改一下英语作文吧,谢谢啦
failure may lead to success.People who strongly support it (原句中定语从句没有谓语动词，你也可以改成the strong backers ，这样更简洁）assert that we can learn from the failure so that we will not make the same mistakes next time . In the second place , ...
自己写的英语作文。请帮忙修正。
there are many differences between these two. However, the truth is that adult me and child me are so different, but still be a same person. “Child me” and “Adult me” in three sides make each one quite distinct from the other.Outward...
请帮忙改篇英语作文
I have many friends. I wish you will like me, too.
请帮忙改改英语作文.
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请帮忙修改下面的英语作文
你这个文章里的错误还是不少的啊，可以改的地方太多。She is a cute girl and turning 18 years old this year.She just celebrated her 18th birthday last month.She was born in China and lived there untile she was 16(是么？）. She came to the US two years ago.She likes Jazz ...
请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文(初三水平)
You can buy many beautiful pen-bags which were did by ourselves in there.(你的原句）这句里面的错误有 were 和did2个动词一起并列，in there副词前面还带介词。You和ourselves 指示关系矛盾。可以改为：You can buy many beautiful DIY pen-bags there.(不用强调是我们，或是谁做的，你说...
初一英语作文帮忙修改下
four big legs, a long nose and a very strong body. I like her very mush because she is very cute. However, she is a bit dangerous. She can attack people! Ling Ling relaxes four hours every day. Do you know what Ling Ling is? Let me tell you! She is an elephant....
【急】请高手帮忙改下【英语作文】
She is an excellent leader in our class.She helps teachers manage the class. At the School’s Sport Meeting, she supervised the training, and helped our class win alot of prizes.She is also a close friend of mine.She is always helps me patiently. And it seems that she never...
·各位帮忙帮我修改一下我的英语作文谢谢!
括号里的就是改的，基本上没什么错误，写得很不错，继续努力哦 As time goes by,modern technologies develop faster and faster,and the pressure from study becomes heavier and heavier to every student.Some students cannot bear the pressure so they gradually hate their school life.And some ...
请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文。
1、这是叙述过去的事件，而且有准确的时间，因此全文的基本时态确定为一般过去时。用一般现在时不合适。2、return 是动词，前面已经有了take a bus所以这里连续用动词是错误的，改为back home，这里没必要加our。3、noodle一般用复数形式，改为noodles。4、午餐是lunch，dinner改为lunch，和早餐晚餐保持...
