我写了 一篇英语作文 帮我改写一下好吗？ 非常感谢你。
Computers are more and more popular
Nowadays Computers are popular throughout the world. Computers are very important to us. For example, they can help us to send e-mails to our friends,we can play computer games and listen to music on it. In other words, without computers, we can't do many things.So computers can give us more corvenient. I like it very much. I hope to buy one some day.
Nowadays Computer is very popular throughout the world. Computer is very important in our daily life. For example, it can help us send e-mails to our friends, we can play computer games and listen to music by using computer. In other words, we can't do many things without the help of a computer.So computer can bring us more convenience. I like it very much. I hope to buy one in the future.
Nowadays,computers are popular throughout the world. Computers are very important to us. For example, they can help us to send e-mails to our friends,and we can play computer games and listen to music on them. In other words, without computers, we can't do many things.So computers can give us more convenience（这句有点费解，改改？？）. I like them very much. I hope to buy one someday.
我写了一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
挺好的~其实我也没做大改动，还是你的意思吧~~
这是我写的一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢你!
I think our school life is colorful and wonderful. Because we have many activities. We can play basketball , volleyball, and badminton in the playground after school . I like playing basketball best. I always practise playing basketba...
我写了一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
I have many friend中friend加s He is always ready to help others and try his best to help the classmates when they're in trouble. 中try应用三单，tries。I think of he is a kind and honest person. 把of改为that I with to keep the friendship between Tony and I ...
这是我写的一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗? 万分感谢!
Therefore, I hope all of the people can be responsible for it so that our would will be more and more beautiful.水平有限，希望能帮到你
我写了一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢你!
I thought, my mother had been working hard and she was tired. In return, I have to study harder an. Thank you,my dear mother,for every little thing you did for me.说真的，有点难度啊 不过还好，楼主文采斐然，改好后还是挺棒的，继续加油啊！O(∩_∩)O哈哈~对了，别忘加分哦...
我写了 一篇英语作文 帮我改写一下好吗? 非常感谢你。
Nowadays Computer is very popular throughout the world. Computer is very important in our daily life. For example, it can help us send e-mails to our friends, we can play computer games and listen to music by using computer. In other words, we can't do many things ...
我写的一篇英语作文, 给我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
后一句自然去掉。I also 一句改为：I also can enjoy my long summer vacation.这样更地道一些。后面几句写得很精彩，无需改动。解释一下去掉第一句的原因：在英语思维里，这一句纯属多余，很不严密，因为喜欢夏天的人大有人在，这样说会让人感到莫名其妙，并且表达方式也是中国式英语，不好。
一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你。
Last Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present which was bought by(加上了定于从句)my Dad.Opening the present,I was amamzed(用了非谓，在句中很提分).（要注意语序，先打开，才知道里面是什么）It was a dictionary.And(注意衔接)it was not only thick but （用了not o...
...给我打一下分数,同时,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢了!
confidence to become better in many ways.i can feel the honest between he and i . i wish the friendship will between he and i last forever.其中楼主写的几句话感觉不是很对...所以用了自己的话来写了..我们当时的英语作文是16分..感觉楼主如果没有什么拼写错误的话有14分可以拿 ...
我写了一篇英语作文,若按中考18分评分的话,可以得几分?还有,帮我修改...
1.字数太少，只有79个 2.用词不当：如in my home（应该改为：in my family; some suggestions是复数形式，然而内容方面只有一点；而且suggestion用在这里不太合适应该为my opinion）3.文中错误：it's应该为its； do 应该为doingthe home work more than2 hours,而且本句表达不符合英语习惯； ...
