如何达到雅思大作文四点评分标准08

如题所述

正题：

ESSAY分为三部分：
1.Introduction
2.Body
3.Conclusion

一篇学术性论文当中，这三部分是必须要有的，同理在考试中才能得高分。

那么什么是introduction呢，之前看书说是把题目用替换词带入照抄，后来发现这是傻瓜式写法，对于要求写作7分以上的同学并不适用。真正的introduction是“present your viewpoint”那么怎样来present呢？继续。

第一步：lead-in background information即导入背景信息。
看这个例子：
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion..
这个论文题目里， tourism 就是一个背景信息，所以我们introduction里第一句就该来介绍或者叫导入背景信息，即tourism的信息。例如： Tourism has became an indispensable part in our modern world.或者Tourism is gradually considered to be a hot topic

第二步：narrow down information即从大背景信息里提出你要去论证的方面。还是上面给出的题目，你要narrow down出来的就是：“people show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures”

第三步：your viewpoint即给出你自己的立场。例如上题你就可以说：“As far as I am concerned，I side with the former”

【Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.】
Introduction：
“Tourism is gradually considered to be a hot topic. People show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures. As far as I am concerned，I side with the latter.”

这里要注意，第一步和第二步都是general statement，都是题目已经给你的，只需要你用学术性的文字合理输入就好了，但是第三步是thesis statement，这才是最重要的，是你对这篇论文的观点，也是你接下来要引出Body的关键句，承前启后。。恩。。就这么理解吧。
关于BODY部分，正反两方面都要提及比较好，一边倒往往写着写着就没话了，尤其是在考试中一紧张反应会慢点。。这部分大家参考十天写作这本书就好了。尤其是后面关于各个话题的好句子。段落基本就是2-3段。这里需要强调的一点就是，一定要注意句子的连贯性，就是连接词的运用，承接，转折，句子长短搭配，在用词方面尽量多用学术性更强的词汇。Important可以用significant代替等等。嘿嘿，大家都知道的吧，我就不废话了。

再说下conclusion部分。
1. summary
2. idea

Summary就是对你body两部分的一个总结。Idea就是你自己的观点，就是retell your viewpoint如果还是拿上面那个题目来说的，假如你是正方面论证的，那么可以这么写：
“From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that the host country should welcome culture different. Though some people think that visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，I still would like to support the former.”

以上就是大作文写作的基本框架，最后再说下写好作文的四个基本要点吧。

Understand the way to write
Appreciate the language
Remember the language
Reflect/Use the language

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