一篇“我愉快的旅行”英语作文，初二，过去式

一次愉快的旅行(A pleasant trip)
Last Saturday,our teather took us to the City Park. At 9:00 ,we arrived at the of my classmates went boating on the lake and others flew kites on the grass. The we had a picnic near the lake at noon. I took many photos. Before we left the park,our thather asked us to chean the park. We all enjoyed ourselves very much.
翻译：上周六,我们老师带我们去城市公园。在9点,我们到达了我的同学去划船在湖上和其他人在草地上放风筝。中午我们有野炊在湖边。我拍了许多照片。在我们离开公园时,他要求我们清公园。我们都玩的很开心。追问

跟家人一起去旅行的。

跟家人一起去旅行的。

追答

那我把这篇改一下就可以了。
Last Saturday,my parents took us to the City Park. At 9:00 ,we arrived there.My friends went boating on the lake and others flew kites on the grass. The we had a picnic near the lake at noon. I took many photos. Before we left the park,my mother asked us to clean the park. We all enjoyed ourselves very much.
翻译：上周六,父母带我们去城市公园玩。9点,我们到达了那里。我的朋友在在湖上划船，其他人在草地上放风筝。中午我们有野炊在湖边。我拍了许多照片。在我们离开公园时,我妈妈要求我们清理公园垃圾。我们都玩的很开心。

追问

比如去海南之类的可以吗？

追答

可以的。你想要这种文章吗。
I went on a trip to Hainan today with my family . We went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and some people swim there. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.
It was an pleasant trip.
翻译:
今天，我和我的家人去海南旅行。我们去沙滩，看到美丽的沙滩,有人在那里游泳。有些人冲浪,有些人潜水深入大海。后来,我们在海滩附近的一个海鲜餐厅吃的午饭。我们吃了海鲜虾和掷骰子赌博,和喝了一些鲍鱼汤。
这是一个激动人心的旅行。

追问

一家四口去海南旅游三天，适合初二学生的，要过去式

追答

I went on a trip to Hainan today with my family . We went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and some people swim there. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.
It was an pleasant trip.
翻译:
今天，我和我的家人去海南旅行。我们去沙滩，看到美丽的沙滩,有人在那里游泳。有些人冲浪,有些人潜水深入大海。后来,我们在海滩附近的一个海鲜餐厅吃的午饭。我们吃了海鲜虾和掷骰子赌博,和喝了一些鲍鱼汤。
这是一个激动人心的旅行。

这篇可以不

追问

要简单一点的

追答

那我再修改一下。

I had a pleasant trip yesterday.My parents and I went to Hainan.We saw the beach.There were some people swimming .Some people were surfing in the sea. We were ate some seafood in restaurant.It is very delicious .We all enjoyed ourselves

昨天我有一个愉快的旅行。我的父母和我去了海南。我们看见海滩。有一些人游泳。一些人在海里冲浪。我们吃了一些海鲜餐厅。它非常美味。我们都玩得很开心。

这个够简单了吧！

追问

好的

追答

I had a pleasant trip yesterday.My parents and I went to Hainan.We saw the beach.There were some people swimming .Some people were surfing in the sea. We were ate some seafood in restaurant.It is very delicious .We all enjoyed ourselves

昨天我有一个愉快的旅行。我的父母和我去了海南。我们看见海滩。有一些人游泳。一些人在海里冲浪。我们吃了一些海鲜餐厅。它非常美味。我们都玩得很开心。

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