大家帮忙我看一看我写的这个英语作文，看看哪里需要多改一改更好，特别是一些比较明显的错误

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In my opinion, it depends on the girl's feeling towards the man. If she only pay atteneion to the man's money rather than his character, she may get stuck in her future life. On the contrary, if she really love the man, appreciate the man's character, she may find happiness in the future.

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