帮忙看一下这篇英语作文哪里有问题（初二的）？

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帮我看一下这篇英语作文。有什么问题?怎么改?这作文什么水平?(英语不...
第一句 really do 别扭是因为你在陈述过去发生的事,并且持续至今，因为今天开始，你写了，所以是个完成时. 既然这句用了first, 为什么我没看到后面的second, third，finally. 另外，用复数。 第2句，By是对的，但是chinese englis 太明显。另外，if 是虚拟语气，你没有用到。As you know,, 别人都...

初二英语作文,环境问题
our roads are more often than not crammed with cars. However, with more and more waste gas being discharged by the cars, the problem of air pollution becomes even more serious. So nowadays we advocate to lead a low-carbon life.My...

初二英语作文 我生活中的问题60字
As a teenager's student, I feel very stressed. Why do you say that?Such as: 1. The course work, do not over of homework.2. No entertainment time, on the day on Saturday and not over the cram school and interest class.I know what they should do, know the importance of...

帮我看下这段 英语作文有什么问题没呢
我暂时发现可两个错误。。最后一段，firstly应该改为frist 应为你的文章没有过去语态，所以把最后一排的过去式改为一般现在时，didnt改为dont

谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文的错误?
下面是对一段的修改，楼主可以参照比较一下：原文：mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me. Said she was felt which place not feeling too well, say again she had a terrible dream, say her young from time to tome ...

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我 会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号 就行。2.中间有很多小句子，...

请大家帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有什么语法问题没有?如果有请大家帮我...
主要是词汇问题。第一行是learn换成learning 第4行read换成reading

初二英语作文,看看有没有语法问题
nothing serious, and prescribed some medicine. "Three times a day. Don't forget it. And you should do more exercise. It can help you to keep fit," said the doctor.Xiao Qiang and his mother left the hospital. He would listen to the doctor's advice and do more exercise....

简单的英语作文,请教各位,请帮忙看一下这个作文有没有什么问题!有点急...
In this summer holiday. I went to Hongshan zoo with my mother. It was a sunny day. We went there by subway. 这段里面holiday不要用复数，因为是一个summer holiday。There are many kinds of animals: tigers, lions, monkeys, pandas and many others. The monkeys are lovely. Some ...

帮我检查一下我写的英语作文有没有什么问题
整篇来说，有"we"又有"your"，可能会搞得你文章的读者混乱，你究竟是用第一人称还是第二人称？最好整篇文章保持一种人称，除非你是要特显出你和读者之间的不同。everybody是作为单数的不定代词，所以我建议：I think everybody have their own opinion where the place they desired to go or visi...