麻烦大家帮我看一下这个投诉信英语小作文 我认真写的 希望大家能帮我找出错误 越细越好 感谢大家

麻烦大家帮我看一下这个投诉信英语小作文 我认真写的 希望大家能帮我找出错误 越细越好 感谢大家 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with dormitory at the college neighbor.Meanwhile,I would to tell you a bad news, I fell very uncomfortable in the dormitory environment.
In the begin,my neighbor was bing (过去完成时)weak up so early everyday,so I was always being (过去完成时) weak up in the early hours by all kinds of loud noises outside,since that dormitory smell is so bad whenever the windows are open.My worry seem not so far-fetched,they feel the smell is so bad when my classmates came(一般过去时) to my dormitory.
I hope the Accommodation officer can make a decision to adjust in order to let me adapt to the (加不加the )dormitory environment .

第一段 would da或 would like to do,不过更建议用want to tell you,feel打错了
第二段 in the beginning,还有你想说叫醒是 waken(过去分词) up,worry后为seems.加不加the我不知道,我一般是加的╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
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