如果有语病,该怎么改?或者怎样说更恰当?——
①Will we be meet again a years later? 五年后我们会再见面吗?
②If you can answer why the earth is round.如果你能回答地球为什么是圆的
③You will surely love to walk across the seventh wharf slowly , just like me .
你必爱慢慢地走过这七号码头,就像我一样
④Long long ago , when you and I was walking in the different flower fields. I could see there's no edge . It seems like I'm been walking forever.
⑤When I open the window , my sunshine come and ease my pain.
当我打开窗户,我的阳光就会出现并缓解我的疼痛
⑥You haven't too many different faces
你没有太多不同的面孔
⑦ You also don't want to be a shallow man and find out to your cost.
你也不想成为一个计较得失的肤浅的人(接上文)
⑧The world will be fine if money is not the most important thing.
People run in circle for money everyday , they've lost their true intention.
⑨Money can cash a big house , a beautiful car and even a family .
But it can't cash happiness.
⑩If you don't speak out , how could we know about your dream?
If you don't show it out, how do people know your ideas?
So you write it down on the paper , you're whishing one day it will come true , but no effort , how could it be true?
句子有点多,谢谢大神!!
Will we meet again five years later?
没问题
You should go by the weventh wharf slowly the way like me.
Long time ago, when you and I were walking in the flower fields, I couldn't see the edge. It seemed that we had been walking forever.
When I open the window, the sunshine get in my heart and ease my pain.
You have not got diferent kinds of faces.
And you don't want to be a shallow person cares about lost and gain.
The world will be perfect if money is not the most important thing.
People chase for money in circle everyday and they have lost their real ideal.
Money can buy you a big house, a nice car and even a family, but it can't buy happiness for you. (cash是名词,做动词是兑付现金的意思)
没问题
没问题
So write it down on the paper, your dreams will become true one day. But without effort, how could it become true?
谢谢!By the way,第九个句子有没有什么地方需要修改一下
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