I have shifted my major from Business Administration to Cultural heritage and Museology,mainly out of my interest.When I visited the national museum of China during the holiday,I was attracted by the cultural relics.What's more,I think business administration is related to the organizational management of museums,what I have learned can be applied to this subject.So gradually,I got the idea that I should try my best to learn Cultural heritage and Museology.
我从工商管理专业转到文物与博物馆,主要是因为我的兴趣。当我在假期期间参观中国国家博物馆时,我被那里的文物所吸引。此外,我认为工商管理与博物馆的组织管理有联系,我所学的知识能运用到这个学科。所以,我打算尽我所能学习文物与博物馆。
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