急~！各位高手帮我检查一下这个演讲稿翻译，拜托各位了~！
Hello everyone,my name is Zhang Lu,and my English name is Emma.I’m from NO.41 meddle school.
One World One Dream
As we know the 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.
And my favorite Olympic event is basketball.And I was a basketball player two years old,so today I will you the history of Olympic basketball.
In 1904, the two American basketball teams first perform the basketball at the 3rd session of Olympic Games which held in the American St. Louis.
In 1936, in the 11th Berlin Olympics Games, the men's basketball finally became the official Olympics event;and the women's basketball became the official Olympics event until 1976 in the 21st Montreal Olympic Games.
From the Olympic Games basketball competition, the world strong teams more concentrated in Europe and the U.S.,American men's and women's basketball is very out standing.
Now,the American basketball is still take the lead,but some strong teams 正在与他们缩小差距。Who is the Olympic champion team into a mystery.
And the slogan of the 29th Olympic Games is’One world one dream’.It embodies the spirit of the Olympic - unity, friendship, progress, harmony, participation and dreams.All over the world is called on to seek the beautiful future by the spirit of the Olympic. We belong to one world, we have the same hopes and dreams.
The end.Thank you~!
顺便把汉语翻译过来
我参加英语比赛用的
谢谢大家
还是老规矩
分不是问题
谢谢大家
汗~~!
我的意思是把语法不对的给我找出来改一下……
容易就容易吧……
我才初二吖~~！！
必须一晚上背过
能有多难吖……
我要的是改错不是翻译~~~~~~~~~！！！！
疯了~~·
大家好，我的名字是张路，而我的英文名字是emma.i '米41号插手学校。
同一个世界同一个梦想
大家都知道，第29届奥运会将在北京举行。
和我最喜欢的奥运盛事，是basketball.and我是一个篮球运动员二年旧，因此，今天我将你的历史，奥林匹克篮球。
在1904年，两名美国篮球队首次演出篮球在第3次会议的奥运会，其中在美国的圣路易斯。
1936年，在第十一届柏林奥运会男篮终于成为正式奥运活动，以及女子篮球成为正式奥运活动，直到1976年，在21蒙特利尔奥运会。
从奥运会的篮球比赛，世界强队多集中在欧洲和美国，美国男，女篮球是很出常委会。
现在，美国篮球仍是起带头作用，但一些强队正在与他们缩小差距谁是奥运冠军队陷入一个谜。
和口号的第29届奥运会is'one世界同一个梦想' ，它体现的精神，奥林匹克-团结，友谊，进步，和谐，参与和d reams.all遍布世界各地，是呼吁寻求美好未来，由精神的奥运会。我们同属一个世界，我们拥有同样的希望和梦想。
对不对啊?呵呵~~
纠正一点 One Word One Drem应该是同一个世界,同一个梦想
