帮我翻译一下这段自我介绍。谢谢!

各位评委你们好。我来自内蒙古通辽市,是一名大二在校学生,就读于天津商务职业学院应用法语专业。在班内任班长一职。在2012-2013学年度,本人因勤工俭学,在麦当劳做兼职工作。在2013到2014学年度暑假期间,曾在内蒙古通辽市一地产公司做实习工作。经过了两年多的工作,学习后,现已有一定的英语听说读写能力和法语交流能力,能熟练的操作Windows平台上的各类应用软件,动手能力较强。本人在两年多的班长工作中受到过很多好评。具有较强的责任心和工作主动性,可以和同事们相处融洽,配合顺利的完成工作任务。本人性格开朗,善于沟通,谦虚,自信,所以我认为我可以胜任这份工作。谢谢。
不要用翻译软件,谢谢!

第1个回答  2014-05-24
你的中文翻译:
Good morning! It's my hornor to have an opportunity to attend this interview.
I'm ## and 22 years old. I graduated from ... and I was majored in Logistics Management.
I'm outgoing and positive. I'm detail-oriented and team-oriented on work. I'm an adaptable person so I believe I can get used to your working tempo and environment in a short time. During my college life, I proactively participated in college activities and Student Uniton matters. I was once the person in charge of Student Uniton, which greatly enhances my capabilities. I'm familiar with Microsoft Office and other professional softwares. I made full use of my leisure time by taking part-time jobs, which makes me understand that everything demands full engagement and persistence, enhances my communication skills and my capabilities to face any urgent situation with cool head, to think in a careful and all-round manner, and to solve problems in a sensable way.

建议修改为:
Good morning! It's my hornor to have an opportunity to attend this interview.
I'm ## and 22 years old. I graduated from ... and I was majored in Logistics Management.
In terms of personality, I'm outgoing and positive. As for work, I'm detail-oriented and team-oriented. I'm an adaptable person so I believe I can get used to your working tempo and environment in a short time.
During my college life, I worked hard on my major while acquired myself with nenessary knowledge. I'm familiar with Microsoft Office and other professional softwares. Meanwhile, I proactively participated in college activities and Student Uniton matters. I was once the person in charge of Student Uniton, which greatly enhances my work capabilities. I also made full use of my leisure time by taking part-time jobs, which makes me understand that everything demands full engagement and persistence, enhances my communication skills and improves my capabilities to face any urgent situation with cool head, to think in a careful and all-round manner, and to solve problems in a sensable way.
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