英语句子在线改错
one summer,I volunteered to working in a public library.___
It was very interesting experience during which I met a great___
deal of persons and tried new things.____
I worked to help with the library's reading program _____
by entering the name of children who had signed up into____
the library's computer system.I also helped taught computer___
skills.that was necessary for them to master the skills.____
Though the program was finished,I received a letter____
and small gifts of my services,and I was happy to have made___
someone's life more better through my efforts. _____
第1个回答 2009-12-21
1.One summer,I volunteered to work in a public library.（working改为work）
2.It was very interesting experience in which I met a great.（during改为in）
3.deal with persons and tried new things.（of改为with）
4.I work to help with the library's reading program.（worked改为work）
5.by entering in the name of children who had signed up into
6.the library's computer system.I also help to teach computer.
7.It was necessary for them to master the skills.
8.Although the program was finished,I received a letter.
9.I was happy to have received small gifts for my services.
10.someone's life will be better through their's efforts.
开始只是觉得单词要修改，后来发觉语序也有问题，所以后面的就直接写的句子，没有标明啦！
2.It was very interesting experience in which I met a great.（during改为in）
3.deal with persons and tried new things.（of改为with）
4.I work to help with the library's reading program.（worked改为work）
5.by entering in the name of children who had signed up into
6.the library's computer system.I also help to teach computer.
7.It was necessary for them to master the skills.
8.Although the program was finished,I received a letter.
9.I was happy to have received small gifts for my services.
10.someone's life will be better through their's efforts.
开始只是觉得单词要修改，后来发觉语序也有问题，所以后面的就直接写的句子，没有标明啦！
第2个回答 2009-12-21
one summer,I volunteered to (work) in a public library.___
It was (a) very interesting experience during which I met a great___
(number) of persons and tried new things.____
I worked to help with the library's reading program 打钩
by entering the (names) of children who had signed up into____
the library's computer system.I also helped (teach) computer___
skills.(It) was necessary for them to master the skills.____
(When) the program was finished,I received a letter____
and small gifts (for) my services,and I was happy to have made___
someone's life () better through my efforts. _____本回答被网友采纳
It was (a) very interesting experience during which I met a great___
(number) of persons and tried new things.____
I worked to help with the library's reading program 打钩
by entering the (names) of children who had signed up into____
the library's computer system.I also helped (teach) computer___
skills.(It) was necessary for them to master the skills.____
(When) the program was finished,I received a letter____
and small gifts (for) my services,and I was happy to have made___
someone's life () better through my efforts. _____本回答被网友采纳
第3个回答 2009-12-21
1 把working 改为work.
2在very 前加a 因为是经历experience是就可数。
3deal改为number因为deal of后接不可数
4对的
5去掉into因为前面有enter 其有进入的意思。但是我又觉得name好像应该是要用复数。不确定
6taught改为原型。help后接原型。
7.that改为it形式主语。
8.though,改为after因该是事后感谢人逻辑问题
9of改为for.
10.去掉more重复了。自己做的难免有点错误但可以借鉴
2在very 前加a 因为是经历experience是就可数。
3deal改为number因为deal of后接不可数
4对的
5去掉into因为前面有enter 其有进入的意思。但是我又觉得name好像应该是要用复数。不确定
6taught改为原型。help后接原型。
7.that改为it形式主语。
8.though,改为after因该是事后感谢人逻辑问题
9of改为for.
10.去掉more重复了。自己做的难免有点错误但可以借鉴
参考资料：自己做的
第4个回答 2019-08-06
I
often
quarrel
(with)
my
mother
over
whether
I
can
watch
TV.She
holds
view
That
senior
three
students
have
to
make
(full)
use
of
every
minute
to
work
hard
at
（their）
lessons.It
seems
to
(she)
that
once
I'm
allowed
to
do
that,I
will（be）
unable
to
control
myself
and
forget
all
about
my
study.She
also
thinks
it
is
bad
for
my
(eyes).But
I
can't
accept
her
ideas.In
my
opinion,(watching)
TV
can
(sets)
my
mind
at
rest
after
a
day's
hard
(work).Besides.it
is
important
for
us
to
know
what
had
happened
at
home
and
at
abroad.Thus,we
Shouldn't
be
forbidden
to
watch
TV.
often
quarrel
(with)
my
mother
over
whether
I
can
watch
TV.She
holds
view
That
senior
three
students
have
to
make
(full)
use
of
every
minute
to
work
hard
at
（their）
lessons.It
seems
to
(she)
that
once
I'm
allowed
to
do
that,I
will（be）
unable
to
control
myself
and
forget
all
about
my
study.She
also
thinks
it
is
bad
for
my
(eyes).But
I
can't
accept
her
ideas.In
my
opinion,(watching)
TV
can
(sets)
my
mind
at
rest
after
a
day's
hard
(work).Besides.it
is
important
for
us
to
know
what
had
happened
at
home
and
at
abroad.Thus,we
Shouldn't
be
forbidden
to
watch
TV.
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