谁帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误，帮我加上几句话也行！谢谢
The modern university students should have responsibility to excavate and drive traditional holiday and modern holiday. From the tradition of Valentine’s Day and Qixi festival, we know that China and western countries are all have romantic legends. From the celebration of the Chinese New Year’s Day (the Spring Festival) and American New Year’s Day, we know each country has their own ways to celebrate festivals, different countries has different ways to celebrate, different festivals have different meaning. At the same time, university students are able to understand western festival’s custom and its meaning as great as Chinese national festivals’, these cultural information reflect some social style, traditional custom, thinking manner, even the philosophy. Furthermore, these festival cultures can improve cross-cultural communication ability. There are a lot of different characteristics between Chinese holiday culture and western holiday culture. Following Chinese and western holiday culture mutually affect and combine, it will bring a nice gospel to people.
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5月5日 23:21 My body says let's go,my heart says no 是两个句子，两个句子如果中间是用逗号连接的话，那么在第2个句子句首就需要加AND ，BUT ，OR等连词，根据文章的语境和大意的话，你这个句子是加BUT，但是如果你把这两个句子中间的标点改成句号的话，也是对的，或者改成分号。但这里最佳的改法应该是加连词BUT：My body says let's go,but my heart says no
The modern university students should have responsibility to excavate and drive traditional and modern holiday. the celebration of Valentine’s Day and Qixi festival shows China has romantic legends as western countries. From the celebration of New Year’s Day of American New and China, we know each country has its own way to celebrate festivals, different countries have different ways for celebration, different festivals have different meaning. At the same time, university students are able to understand western festival’s custom and their meaning as great as Chinese national festivals’, these cultural information reflect some social style, traditional custom, thinking manner, even the philosophy. Furthermore, these festival cultures can improve cross-cultural communication ability. There are a lot of different characteristics between Chinese and western holiday culture. the mutually affection and combination of Chinese and western holiday culture will bring a nice gospel to people .本回答被提问者采纳
高手们,帮我看一下这段话有没有语法错误,谢谢
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