麻烦大家帮我看一下，我写的这段话有没有语法错误，谢谢
Last Friday,I had a ridiculous day.my friend Mark was came to ShenZhen see me,He let's me meet him at the airport.Mark is my best friend.I was very exciting. On Friday morning,I felled a little sick and I was pretty busy.Untill 12 PM,Mark called me.He was waiting for 10 minutes downstairs."Oh, my God!I completly forgot",I shouted. After a few minutes,I bought him to my house.He was complain to me."Everthing is so expensive in ShenZhen","It's cost 50 yuan to by taxi from airport".
错误是很多，没有办法，都好久没有用过英语了，麻烦各位指出来哈。谢谢了！！！
麻烦大家帮我看一下,我写的这段话有没有语法错误,谢谢
有错误的地方更正如下：My friend Mark came to Shenzhen to see me.He let(过去式）me...I felt a little sick ...At 12 AM...He has waited for... a few minutes later, I brought him to my house. He compained to me .."It cost 50 yuan to take a taxi here from the a...
帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误
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帮我看一下我写的这封英文信有没有语法错误吧~~
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请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误,O(∩_∩)O谢谢3
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一篇英语小作文,麻烦请大家看看有没有语法错~~【高分!在线等】_百度知 ...
总得来说，没有什么太大的语法错误，就是在遣词用字方面，要注意些细微差别，我帮你润饰修改了一下，希望你喜欢！Dear Ben Thank you very much for your letter. I hope I can give you some useful suggestions.You complained you have felt stressed with the workload in school and you ...
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大家帮我分析一下,我说的话有没有毛病?谢谢了
理论上最有效的办法就是延迟回答，你可以停顿几秒钟，把脱口而出的话，先过遍脑子，此所谓三思而后行。但是理论怎么跟实践相结合，那就看你自己的修为了，不光跟她，跟每个人都要刻意的去锻炼自己这种意识，把语速调慢一些，思考问题全面一些，说话的质量就会不断提高了。再有，在开口之前你没有深入...
大家来帮我看个英语演讲稿,找找有没有语法错误.谢谢
When I was a child, I hoped to grow up immediately. However, （when i really grow up 始终觉得你的原句有问题）, how I wish I（were虚拟语气） a child! Once we grow up, the carefree time (flows away,too.其实演讲趋于口语化，我觉得可以少用那些完成时等很注重语法的句子较好)....
帮忙看看我写的一篇英语作文,看看有没有什么错误?
这段你没有觉得怪怪的么……怎么也应该是先说We can do a lot to protect water，才举可以怎样做的例子吧~而且例子的内容也有点单薄了恩~结尾再有深度一点~~那个~逻辑关系最好在紧密一点，因果关系什么的再强烈一点。比如说多用点连接词，像什么as a result of, for example, from my ...
