帮忙翻译一句英文。谢谢了！！！

请问您是何时发出的货物，何时能够到达中国？
Please inform us of the time you dispatched the cargos we ordered and the time of arrival in China.

一楼不对，因为可能货物已经发出了，二楼的：Could you tell me please when you made the delivery and when it will arrive in China ?对

Could you tell us that when the cargo was delivered? And when will it arrive in China? Thanks!

When are you going to send out the goods, and when can they reach China?

Would you tell me the exact time of the delivery time and the arriving time in China?