我是做IC集成外贸的,只会用翻译软件翻译,但是语法不行,求外贸高手帮忙写外贸开发信

自己有开一个外贸公司,是做IC集成的,主要是自己有2个业务出去了,叫penny跟ivy,客户的邮箱资料都在我手里,我想发邮件让客户知道penny跟ivy都不再公司工作了,想把客户都拉过来,以下是我用翻译工具翻译的,求你们帮忙,感激不尽
Dear

Nice day ! I am the general manager of the (公司名), My name is Len Ma
Once we cooperation in seekic What's your impression of our company? I am very want to work with you for long time,
we are good at in IC components ,capacitors and resistors ,diode and triode ,product PCB,LED and LCD ,connector ,fuse ,Computer accessories and cell phone accessories ......
we are in business for 9 years,we are professional,worth you to chose !
so hope you can send any other new inquiry to me, i must quote you the best price with good quality. ok?
hope you can reply me as soon as you can.
All the best
我这信里面没有说到工作人员的离开,因为不知道怎么说,麻烦外贸专家帮我想下怎么写比较好,不要让客户感觉到工作人员的离开,我的公司就会变得弱小,实力不怎么样

第1个回答  2013-11-22
Dear xxx,

Nice day ! I am the General Manager of the (公司名), My name is Len Ma.
As we cooperated in seekic once, how do you feel about our company? I hope to have more chance to cooperate with you in the future.
we feature out business in IC components ,capacitors and resistors ,diode and triode ,product PCB,LED and LCD ,connector ,fuse ,Computer accessories and cell phone accessories ......
we have been involved in this business for over 9 years, and quite professional. You can feel confident to select us !
Look forward to your new inquiry. i will quote you the best price with good quality. ok?
Hope you can reply me as soon as you can.
All the best
第2个回答  2013-11-22
Dear _____

Hope you are having a successful start to your day ,I am Lenma ,the General manager of (公司名).
We have been cooperate on Seekic with your esteemed company ,and we would like to sustain the business relationship due to Penny and Ivy were leave their job temporarily,I will take the further work for your order .
As you know ,we are supplying best quality of IC components ,capacitors and resistors ,diode and triode ,product PCB,LED and LCD ,connector ,fuse ,Computer accessories and cell phone accessories etc& .We are professional cause we are career in business over 9 years ,worth your chose.If there is any any questions ,please just let me know

Hope to hearing good news from you .
第3个回答  2013-11-22
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Dear ,,,,

I am General Manager of ??????? Co., Ltd. from ??, China.

This email is to inform you that Penny and Ivy, two our former sales representatives, no longer work for us for personal reasons. Please direct all your future emails to ?????@????.com for inquireis or orders of our products such as IC components, capacitors and resistors, diode and triode, PCB product, LED and LCD, connector, fuse, computer accessories and smart phone accessories.

We here at ??? Co., Ltd. has been in this business for nearly a decade. Our products are of good quality and we have rich experience dealing with foreigners.

We are sorry for any inconvenience this change of contact may have caused you. And we look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Please feel free to contact me for any questions or inquiries.

Yours sincerely,

Len Ma
General Manager
???? Co., Ltd.追问

这个不错哦,高手,你是专业外贸员吗

追答

谢谢。我只是经常跟外国人打交道而已。

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第4个回答  2013-11-22
这样的肯定不行,没有其他外贸员了么
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